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Caustic Chimera hot on her heals, Mint has to do something to unleash the beast. Oh? What's this? Why thank you for volunteering to help, Miss Police Woman!
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Continuing the good stuffs. Next chapter might not be back to story building, but this one is still very much belonging on Eka's. Thank you all for your comments and critiques so far. They really keep my motivation strong.
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Posted by Graywolf18 6 years ago Report
Can you say Mint flavored Dinosward? (inside joke, ignore that one) She kicked that chimera's ass. And her internal struggle with morality. Mmph!
However... after having finished reading... I can't help but picture a certain scientist sitting at home, drinking some herbal tea trying to relax after a long work day. Then hearing a newsflash pop up on his television. Poor guy. I'll be surprised if he shows up again as anything more than an honorable mention.
Posted by Arthotus 6 years ago Report
I played with time just a bit with the last 'bad guy scene'. That conversation took place 'after' this chapter, hence why Mr.Boss man was so pissed.
Posted by Graywolf18 6 years ago Report
Oh, cleaver. I didn't even pick up on that. So that cup of tea I mentioned is more like a bottle of whiskey and 1 round of Russian roulette with two 'misses'.
Posted by Arthotus 6 years ago Report
Ooooh yeah. He doesn't have much faith that Alexandra can kill every single unleashed Beast. I wonder why?
Posted by TheMysteriousSadSack 6 years ago Report
I really love the whole struggling against the raptors instincts and her own morals, I can only hope that she can beat out the raptors influence long enough to finish the game.
Posted by Arthotus 6 years ago Report
She's in charge so far, but we'll see!
Posted by TheMysteriousSadSack 6 years ago Report
Ominous, I like it.
Posted by GeneralUrist 6 years ago Report
And so it begins! Seems like the way for Mint to call on the Rainbow Raptor (who she's now almost completely merged with) is to 'give in' to it's animalistic instincts. I like the struggling against the Raptor's instincts as well as her own morals. I'm curious where this goes.
Y'know I normally don't read fatal vore stories, but this has really got me engaged!
I like the way that Mint keeps the raptor's belly if she turns back to human, and how in human form she doesn't keep it's video-game-logic fast digestion. Could lead to some fun big-belly shenanigans in the future! Though I hope that transforming back with too much in her belly doesn't cause chaos. If the Caustic Chimera wasn't on her tale and she had turned back after eating the officer, or if she hadn't resisted the instincts and decided to eat the boy... hee hee!
Also, since she didn't take the officer's clothes off, does that mean she's got stuff like handcuffs or her badge in her belly? Can she even get those things out without turning back to raptor form? (even if it can't digest metal well, its intestines are probably much stretchier). Sorry, object swallowing is my fetish so I tend to think about this sorta stuff.
Posted by Arthotus 6 years ago Report
That is a really good point that I hadn't fully considered. What does happen to the metal bits...
Posted by GeneralUrist 6 years ago Report
Trust in me to think a little too much about these sorts of things! While I won't get mad if you handwave it, I personally would like it if you addressed it somehow.
(In general a shapeshifter keeping their big belly after going from a vore-capable predator form to a non-vore-capable 'normal' form is a little-explored avenue, and it seems you have a chance to explore it here.)
Posted by Arthotus 6 years ago Report
It will be briefly adressed in future chapters. Appologies if it lacks the 'screen time' you might like, since object swallowing isn't one of my kinks. Sorry!