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the prophesied "hero of the village" loses a battle with a velociraptor girl on his first day of questing! oh no! what could possibly happen to him?!

a quick little story i wrote in pieces when i found time while i was away for a few days. this time set in a monster girl quest-style fantasy rpg world where monster girls and beast-women steal away men from villages to rape (and most of the time eat) them. this world comes out of the blue after i remembered how much i love the thought of the protagonist being humiliatingly eaten and turned into pudge by some low level monster or something like that, their last moments are that of utter humiliation as they get digested by a beast that was just passing by and decided it was just hungry to have a hero sized snack, no one even finding out what happened to him, or if they do it's even more humiliating to find out what fate befell their beloved hero, and now that the hero's out of the way the whole village is probably doomed to the same fate

in other words bad endings and dino girls are extremely hot.

i hope you enjoy! :)

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Bellyl0ver

Posted by Bellyl0ver 6 years ago Report

Never enough Velociraptor girl preds. Anyway, nice story.

Helios542

Posted by Helios542 6 years ago Report

Glad you liked it! And I agree, i cant get enough dino girls

VampireBunny

Posted by VampireBunny 6 years ago Report

Intelligence difference in Vore is a favorite of mine, yet it's not popular and theres never been a tag for it

Helios542

Posted by Helios542 6 years ago Report

it adds a whole new angle of degradation and humiliation that i love a lot, it's a shame it isn't explored that much.

Philosoraptor

Posted by Philosoraptor 6 years ago Report

Fun little story, but thought you might want to add a "humiliation' tag, since being humiliated by his defeat seemed to really bother the warrior. While I understand a lot of writers do not like scat, or scat references in their stories, despite it being a obligatory result of being eaten and digested, I would think that the far more humiliating moment that the defeated warrior would dread than people finding his sword, would have been if they found the steaming 'dino dump' that they would realize used to be him! He might wonder if they would even give the turd he had become the dignity of a funeral and burial, or just leave it rotting in the sun because he had so miserably failed them? Realistically speaking, cotton, linen or woolen clothing of earlier times is all made of very hard to dissolve and digest fibers, and would very likely survive a trip through a reptilian digestive system far better than even his bones that would most likely be dissolved completely, or reduced to unidentifiable, rounded lumps. Thanks for sharing!

Helios542

Posted by Helios542 6 years ago Report

Glad you liked it and fun afterthought, but i'm not into scat at all, even implied, so i won't be making references to it, sorry.

Nevek

Posted by Nevek 6 years ago Report

I like your name.

Helios542

Posted by Helios542 6 years ago Report

well thank you very much :)

billy999

Posted by billy999 6 years ago Report

Always love your work and yiur right definately not enough dino girls

Helios542

Posted by Helios542 6 years ago Report

Thank you ^_^

UserMan90

Posted by UserMan90 6 years ago Report

!

Helios542

Posted by Helios542 6 years ago Report

I agree