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"Ok Mom, I'm heading out!" "Ok bye sweetie, be back before dinner!". Sophia was going to her friend Harper's birthday party, she is turning 20, more like 16 Sophia thought. Harper wasn't the greatest when it came to acting your age, she would get excited over the littlest things, she would always play childish games like pull my finger, and she would buy the weirdest things like stuffed animals and trinkets. Sophia really liked Harper for that (Not in a sexual way) because she was the one with the most imagination in their little group of friends, Sophia's other friends could be boring at some time but they were still fun to be around with.
Sophia arrived at Harper's house, there was a small bunch of balloons outside her front door and a small sign on blank paper that read "Welcome to my 20th birthday party, please, come in!" written in crayon. Sophia walked through the front door and was greeted by Harper's mother.
"Thank you so much for coming to our daughter's party, she wouldn't stop talking about how excited she was for you to show up." "Oh, it's fine, I was also pretty excited to come to her party." "If you don't mind, Harper bought these little party hats and she wanted everyone to wear one, I know it may look childish but she really liked them." "I don't mind at all" Sophia took a party hat and put it on. The elastic band holding it to her head was a bit uncomfortable, but she didn't mind, as long as it was for Harper. "Harper is upstairs with a few other friends, my husband is out getting the cake and should be back in the next hour." "Alright, thanks for letting me know."
Sophia walked up the stairs of Harper's house and noticed an open door with a few familiar voices, Sophia peeked into the room and found Harper sitting on her carpeted floor with a few other friends, there was Naomi (the carefree and laid back girl), Sarah (the quiet and shy bookworm), and Ruby (the smart and responsible one). *Sophia you're here!* Harper screamed "Yep the one and only heh." *This is great, now that we have 5 people here, you guys want to go outside to play some games* [Well, my back does hurt a little from sitting like this for a half hour so I could use a good stretch.] Naomi announced (Same) said Sarah. *Ok, it's settled, Let's go outside!*
The gang went out the back sliding door to Harper's large back yard, (So, what do you guys want to do first?) *How about hide and seek, when we were kids we loved that game!* <That sounds fun, let's do that>. *I'm going to count first, ok-* Harper was cut off when a loud sound distracted them. At first it was low and deep, it was getting louder, everyone was looking around when Sarah noticed something.
Sophie was clutching her stomach as it was letting out one of the biggest growls in her life, (U-um Sophie, are you hungry?) "W-well yeah, maybe a little, I skipped breakfast and lunch because I was going to fill myself up here" *Oh I'm sorry, but the food will only be here in about an hour when my dad gets back* "It's fine, really, I can wait." *Alright, so, I am going to be it first and it will be my job to find each one of you, so you better pick a good hiding spot. Hehehe. Alright, I will count down from 50, so get hidin. One, Two*
The girls didn't waste any time, they ran off in separate directions to find a hiding spot, Ruby found a hollow bush and hid inside, Naomi climbed up a tree, and Sarah laid down in a patch of tall grass. Sophie couldn't see a possible hiding spot and was about to follow someone else when she spotted a little desert like area with some big bushes. Sophie ran as fast as she could since Harper was almost done counting, Sophie dove behind the bush at the same time Harper reached zero, Sophie was safe.
Harper took her hands off her face and took a second to look around before going off in the opposite direction of Sophie. Sophie was almost out of breath because she ran so fast, but something caught her attention, a small nest of snakes was a few feet away from the spot she was hiding at.
Sophie really liked snakes, but couldn't risk making any noise at the moment because Harper would hear her, Harper had just found Naomi up in the tree and was walking around in the area Sarah was in. The group of snakes started to slither over to Sophie, Sophie was calm about it and stayed put. Then, much to her dismay, her stomach let out an extremely loud growl. It was so loud, in fact, that it echoed throughout Harper's backyard making it almost impossible to tell which direction it was coming from. Sophie's face turned beet red when she heard Harper yell *Oh Sophie! I can hear you~*. Sophie needed something to fill her stomach, but there was nothing for her to eat around her. She was starting to lose hope when one of the snakes took her stomach growl as a threat and lunged at her, attempting to strike directly at her face. Sophie's incredibly fast reflexes kicked in, and she grabbed it by the head.
She was in shock that she was able to grab it with such speed, her stomach growled louder, reminding her that she needed to fill it. She then got an idea, but she wasn't so sure about it. The snake wasn't that big, as thick as her thumb, and about a foot long. It shouldn’t be that bad, right? She thought. Sophie was a bit opposed to the idea of eating it, and she didn't want to lose either, so she did what she had to. Sophie held the head of the snake and used her other hand to stick the tail in her mouth.
Sophie swallowed, pulling the snake’s lower body inside her tight throat, she was actually enjoying the taste of the snake. She swallowed again, pulling the snake deeper inside of her, the snake's body was wiggling inside her throat which made it easier to get down. Sophie giggled a little when she felt the snake's tail tickle the inside of her stomach, causing her to gag and swallow the rest of the snake down like water. Sophie took a few deep breaths, then lifted up her shirt to look at her belly. It was satisfied, but not full, Sophie then looked at the remaining 3 snakes with a devilish grin.
She swiftly grabbed them and stuck all three in at the same time, they went down a lot more smoothly than the first one, and they felt good inside her stomach. Sophie let out some wet belches, but they weren’t loud enough to be heard by anyone else (except the snakes). Sophie laid down, but still out of sight, contently rubbing her belly. Her belly wasn't bulging out even though it felt really full with them squirming around in there, but if Sophie was being honest with herself, she totally could've gone for more.
Sophie then let out a loud burp and just like the stomach growl, it echoed throughout Harper's backyard. Sophie was so caught up in eating the snakes that she forgot about the game and hear Harper yell *I've got you now!* as she ran in Sophie's direction. *Bam! I got you Sophie, I win!* Harper yelled "Wait, you found everyone already" *Yeah, I actually had trouble finding you* [Yeah but then you let out that monstrous burp ha-ha] Naomi said. "I didn't mean to Naomi." <It's alright Sophie, everyone does it every now and then, just not that loud.>. Sophie was pretty embarrassed that her friends had just heard her let out a big burp, but she was glad that they hadn't seen her gobble up those snakes.
The snakes were still alive at the time Harper's dad returned with all the food and even though she wasn’t hungry anymore, Sophie was a big eater and stuffed herself with as much as she could, almost forgetting about the snakes squirming away underneath the mountain of food she consumed. It didn't take long for Sophie's stomach to start the digestion process, unfortunately for the snakes, the acids started to fill up at the bottom of her gut. After an hour of games, eating, and talking with her friends, Sophie had completely forgotten about the snakes sloshing through her intestines with the rest of her digested mush.
It was about 8 o'clock and it was time for the girls to head home, Sophie forgot about how she was supposed to be back before dinner so she left a little earlier than everyone else, when Sophie arrived back at her house her mother was sitting at the dinner table with mountains of food sitting in front of her. "Oh, you're back, how was the party sweetie?" "It was great, I had great food, we played games, and we even-" a loud gurgling erupted from Sophie's abdomen, interrupting her in the middle of her sentence. Sophie clutched her belly before saying "Hold on mom, I have to take care of something" and then sprinting off to the bathroom.
After 15 minutes of waiting, Sophie returned to the dining room. "What happened, I thought you fell in." "It's a long story mom, let's just say that there was something I ate that didn't quite agree with me.".
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So, I realized that I used the word said way too many times in this story so I decided to use different things to tell who's words come from who
Sophie's lines are the normal "
Harper's lines use *
Sarah's lines use ()
Naomi's lines use
and Ruby's lines use <>
I really hope you like this story whoever is reading this right now :)

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Pluie

Posted by Pluie 6 years ago Report

Nice one

Blakesnorf

Posted by Blakesnorf 6 years ago Report

Thanks :)

Blakesnorf

Posted by Blakesnorf 6 years ago Report

thanks, I'm glad you like this :)

Eclipseneko51

Posted by Eclipseneko51 6 years ago Report

I really enjoyed that I like how Sophie went from being apposed to eating them to wanting more of them great work

Blakesnorf

Posted by Blakesnorf 6 years ago Report

Thanks, I'm glad you liked it. If you have any suggestions for my next story please tell me. I would love to hear what you guys have to say :)