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A commission finally completed for Pipper and the start of a series.
Emily Caldwell, a Journalism student at eclectic Sorich University, has been assigned to do interviews and coverage of the school's bizarre Vore program.
Repulsed at first, Emily soon discovers a few things about the consensual program that will broaden her view of the subject matter.
Posted by Combat 6 years ago Report
Quite nearly the start of a masterpiece.
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Posted by the_Wolf 6 years ago Report
Thanks! I hope you'll enjoy the other parts as I can get them done for the commissioner.
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Posted by Combat 6 years ago Report
Any chance of that being soon?
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Posted by twlightking 6 years ago Report
if not for that one small detail about the girl needing to be willing in order for the person to swallow her, i'd have thought the story would be her being mistaken as a memeber of this group and getting eaten.
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Posted by the_Wolf 6 years ago Report
A lot of stories would lead up to that, definitely. This has a longer arc though.
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Posted by BardicLasher 6 years ago Report
Great piece, looking forward to later parts!
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Posted by the_Wolf 6 years ago Report
Happy to hear you're enjoying and anticipating. They'll be posted here as usual once they're done.
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Posted by Bright 6 years ago Report
I really like how you do the dialogue in this story.
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Posted by the_Wolf 6 years ago Report
Thank you again! I have fun working with these characters and their world, so I look forward to when I can work on the next installment.
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Posted by Wildwhombats 5 years ago Report
Is the next part coming out soon?
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Posted by the_Wolf 5 years ago Report
I don't have a timetable at this point, but I do want to continue the series. I may prioritize doing something for a month or two from now, as it seems there is a lot of interest.
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Posted by Wildwhombats 5 years ago Report
Alright! Thanks for letting me know, I really enjoyed this first part and can’t wait to see the rest.
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Posted by Randomdude5 3 years ago Report
I love this story, and am very disappointed that it never got finished. :(
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Posted by the_Wolf 3 years ago Report
Well, it's not dead, not yet. I do have the beginning of the second story, and it's a matter of sitting down and writing it, though I know it's been a couple years now.
I am glad to hear you enjoy this story so much, and I'll try not to George Martin the next part too much longer.
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Posted by Randomdude5 3 years ago Report
Thank you for the reply. I am happy to know that you have not given up on this story. I have a few guesses as to where the plot will go, and am excited to see what you will write.
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Posted by HungryFrog 10 months ago Report
Please tell me this story isn't dead, I've been waiting for part 2 for so long.
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Posted by the_Wolf 10 months ago Report
I haven't given up on this series (was legit thinking about it again the other week), though I know I'm hitting the Martin Index pretty hard now.
I still want to write the next couple parts, along with a few other sequels to other series that have been languishing a bit.
My day job and household soak up a fair bit of time. Audio work has also been growing a lot the last couple years, and bills mean some financial decisions on how I spend creative time, much as I wish that didn't have to be a factor. I want to get back to writing in general along with audio (hell, I still need to turn some stories into audiobooks for better accessibility), with this and several other sequels that deserve their due. So it's still alive and in my mind.
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Posted by HungryFrog 10 months ago Report
That's understandable. I'm just glad to hear that you haven't given up on it. I really enjoyed part 1 and I'm looking forward to what you do with part 2, and possibly past that. If you ever make audio versions of this story that would just be icing on the cake!
Thanks for responding to my comment!
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