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Forth part of my fantasy series.
After having caught and swallowed the second woman, Xantos might think that all is good and well... for him, but the foreign university student might change his opinion about foreign food.
Here is a link to a map I have made for the world where this fantasy series takes place. I made it because maps can be useful to look at every know and then if you are curious about the geography and various locations that are visited: https://aryion.com/g4/view/813080
Please read and review and tell me what you think. Is there anything you would like to see next perhaps^^ ?
Posted by Philosoraptor 5 years ago Report
Entertaining chapter but some explanation may be in order to explain how there was enough light inside of a dragon's stomach to see by. If this was an intelligent dragon one wonders too why it wouldn't have stripped its prey naked to insure it wasn't carrying or wearing anything dangerous. (Even a bird is smart enough to remove the stinger of a bee before swallowing it). Even if dragons preferred swallowing life prey; it would be a simple matter to snap a human's fragile twig-like arms and legs before swallowing them to insure no unexpected stomach troubles. Perhaps the dragon was actually supposed to regurgitate them to retrieve the ring. Thanks for sharing
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Posted by Nalzindar 5 years ago Report
Thanks for your review and I am happy that you liked it. I agree that I should have explained the slight internal glow in the stomach. I was planning to explain it later in the form of a question from one of the women, but I guess I could have don it before^^
And regarding Elyon's clothes; when the dragon swallowed her in chapter two it was mentioned that he was in such a hurry that he didn't have time to remove them. Under normal circumstances however, he would of course have stripped her naked first.
At least you got proof for why fast food isn't good for you... XD And as you say, the birds are already aware of this little fact!
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Posted by Philosoraptor 5 years ago Report
Not that it would take more than five seconds for a dragon to tear off the clothes and even pull off the hard to digest shoes from their human prey and thus insure a safe and easier to 'pass' meal for virtually all clothing and footwear is much harder for a stomach to actually break down than bones. But where would the 'B' fantasy novel and video game industry be if the otherwise highly intelligent dragons didn't so stupidly swallow alive and unharmed the human hero complete with dangerous weapons to conveniently kill their devourer from the inside (not that they would still have much success physiologically speaking in anything but a very cartoony dragon). High heel shoes is a new one though; and obviously should be standard equipment for every fantasy adventurer going on a quest despite the difficulty to run or even walk very far in them.
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Posted by Nalzindar 5 years ago Report
Hehe, good point^^ When writing this I realized that I needed a way to get the woman out again, and thought that perhaps using high the heeled shoes could be a funny way of doing it. Maybe it should be a standard equipment as you say, who knows what other things they can do ;)
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Posted by Philosoraptor 5 years ago Report
reading it in order this actually makes sense now as the dragon was starving and swallowed her in the midst of an escape. An it was pretty obvious she was another innocent victim of the witch and wouldn't have any preplanned plot to allow herself to be swallowed and hurt the dragon with a hidden weapon. The high heels is actually a good idea as she was magically transported there from her own place and time. Mighty convenient though that they all could speak the same language.
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Posted by Nalzindar 5 years ago Report
Thanks, I usually try to give my stories a little bit of logic ; ) Although I made a spoof on it on another story I wrote (The Dream).
I have read and seen many films and comics about people being transported from one world or time period to another, but only once has the language barrier been a (small) topic from what I have seen (A manga called "From Far Away!). Therefore I think it must be a magical or natural law that address this particular problem^^
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Posted by DrakentheBlack 5 years ago Report
That's one way to get out of a dragon's belly. I loved the intimate play the two girls had forced upon them while they were in the stomach though. Not sure which party will be more angry in this situation, but I can't wait to see how this conversation plays out!
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Posted by Nalzindar 5 years ago Report
I am glad you enjoyed this little scene, it can't be easy being swallowed alive either...
As for which party will be most angry, I guess we will have to see, but ruining a woman's clothes aren't exactly going to make you popular ; )
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Posted by nomnomfap 5 years ago Report
Love it! Particularly enjoyed the two of them getting tossed and turned.
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Posted by Nalzindar 5 years ago Report
It was quite an intimate first impression they got of each other and I am happy you enjoyed the stomach scene.
Thanks for reviewing^^
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