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Sarah goes to replace some trail cam SD cards, then a bear shows up.
just a quick throwaway story I wrote in about 2 hours. not bad as I managed to crank out nearly 4k words, I was just revisiting Strega 's classic bear/ bearkiller vore stories a few days ago and it gave me an itch that I then turned into this.
next thing I have in the works is an mlp commission, and 1.15 is now 90% complete.
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Posted by Philosoraptor 6 years ago Report
Well written little story very reminiscent of some of Strega's bear stuff. I would recommend you change the setting to Alaska where the Brown Bears are much bigger than bears in Georgia with 1500 pounds being the weight of an adult male. Of course even a bear that big could barely swallow a rabbit whole and alive as mammals are simply not designed to swallow huge prey like birds reptiles and amphibians are. There has been recently discovered an ancient super bear; though more carnivorous than bears today that had an 11 foot long body and an estimated weight of 3500 pounds that might be able to swallow a very small frames adult human whole given that it is nearly the size of an elephant. Because your bear has virtual human intelligence I would have made it some kind of demon/centuries old native American deity much larger than a typical bear like the gigantic short faced prehistoric one recently discovered. Unlike human giants of considerable size which scientists say are anatomically impossible; we now know that bears virtually the size of elephants were real; and for live human swallowing vore such a creature is the most plausible carnivorous land mammal we now know of to accomplish this. Thanks for sharing!
Posted by doomfister 6 years ago Report
I picked Georgia because of this article (http://www.caucasus-trekking.com/general/staysafe) as it was very secure in saying that the bears were safe and you were more likely to have issues with sheepdogs. so, as usual, I like to take the piss out of the tourism board ;).
the caucus region also has the fact it's in the former soviet union and because their environmental record wasn't the best to put it likely, in addition to all manner of programs they ran. then again it could just be a genetic outlier like Gustav the African crocodile.
this means if I ever plan to revisit this bear have a lot of options for his origin story. I also wanted to have something to deserve the bear was quite old. Alaskan bears only get to around 20 because of the harsh conditions were as European brown bears are recorded getting to 35 plus years. this is likely due to less harsh hibernation stress as the winters are milder. it also means I can reference the fall of the USSR which even animals would realize as a major event, look at deer populations in the caucus for example.
all in all, I think I achieved what I set out to do, have a short fun, semi-realistic bear vore story. that has the possibility of sequels if the bear itch tickles my fancy again.
Posted by Apostolos 6 years ago Report
Red flag?
Posted by doomfister 6 years ago Report
referencing Communism ( https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Communist_Party_of_Georgia_(Soviet_Union))
i wanted to imply the bear was exceptional old. hence the reference to when it was young the soviet union was still a thing. this was also for a realistic variable as old and decrepit animals like tigers are more likely to prey on humans as we are easier to catch then deer and other more natural prey.