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Isabelle and the Mayor experiment with a newfound skill. Also trying out a new writing style, so tell me what you think. Insert yourself, insert your crush, I don't govern what you do with your life, why do you even have to listen to me? I'm just some oddball who writes smut for fun.
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Posted by TakanTwins 5 years ago Report
Definitely a nice writing style for this one, and it's nice to have that self insert option. Good work keeping the mayor ambiguous in that. Just work on keeping the tense consistent. But yeah, great work ^^
Posted by AnIndoorPlant 5 years ago Report
Thanks a bunch for your input! I'll keep that a little better in mind next time, thanks for pointing it out <3
Posted by Toyamura 5 years ago Report
not to sound like i am applying pressure, but i hope this can potentially be a series. highly enjoyable with a very cozy atmosphere. excellent work
Posted by AnIndoorPlant 5 years ago Report
Im flattered, thank you so much for the kind words. As for a series? Im not too sure. Ill have to think about it and see how well it trives for a day or two.
Posted by Caniption 5 years ago Report
Hello there, AIP, nice seeing some of your work! Hadn't realized you already were working on your gallery.
Nice story, the details and flow of it were really nice, and the self insert was great, double so since it didn't leave me in the perspective of prey (a rarity, in my experience, at least). I would gladly read another story like this one, so I guess I had best check out the rest of your gallery!
Posted by AnIndoorPlant 5 years ago Report
Why thank you! Such lovely words. Ill be sure to make the next one even better.