Posted by shortprey20 6 years ago Report

Oooh nice ending! Just out of curiosity will we ever find out about Lucy, the girl that ate the other competitors unwillingly?

Posted by French_snack 6 years ago Report

Thanks. I don't know yet; I have no plans for her at present, but I'm keeping the possibility open.

Posted by DontTellMyWife 6 years ago Report

I wanted to read all the parts before commenting, finding moments alone without my wife asking questions was a bit tricky.

What a story! It was funny, sexy, sad and romantic at various stages.

I'm torn about the Patricia, Carissa and Josh situation because I keep hoping that at least one will get eaten. But I don't want the children to lose their mummy or daddy.

Congratulations to Summer on being the world champion. Although I think Martin is the real winner!

And we finally know what Oksana is up to...will she grace the IVC again?

Posted by French_snack 6 years ago Report

Thanks! I'm very glad you enjoyed it.

I know what you mean about Josh, Pat and Carissa. Part of me, too, would quite like to see one of them be swallowed, but the dynamics of their relationship are something I want to continue to explore. And, indeed, I don't think any of them would abandon the children now.

Ha, Martin certainly acts as if he's the winner, yes! :D And Summer enjoys being teased and infuriated by him, just as much as she likes teasing him in return. He's going to be extra motivated to actually become a world vore champion now, though! He can't let Summer keep rubbing in her superior achievement.

Yes, I'm sure we'll see Oksana competing again. She has some catching up to do!

Posted by bedfordsb 6 years ago Report

Pretty much a novel - this must be one of your longest yet, and thoroughly enjoyable! Some great twists and situations here but I don't want to spoil anything for new readers. Just that you're in for a real treat of vore!

Posted by French_snack 6 years ago Report

Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it. :) Yes, with so many characters, and with story arcs to continue, it turned out quite long!

Posted by Kasra 6 years ago Report

What a championship! The amount of detail you put into describing the people whose momentary existences are solely to be eaten is always astounding, and you really do an excellent job at keeping the pace with the scoring itself. And the almost non-sequitur, Lucy going into hiding, a strange state using vore as a punishment process, you've built quite the world here.

Posted by French_snack 6 years ago Report

Thank you. Credit for Oksana and the state she serves goes to bedfordsb, though: https://aryion.com/g4/view/183364 .

Posted by Sleepless 6 years ago Report

Another five-star addition to this wonderful universe you have created.

I hope we are treated to more very soon.

Posted by French_snack 6 years ago Report

Thanks. I'm glad you enjoyed it!

Not soon, but at some point.

Posted by Pabulum 6 years ago Report

That was so fucking awesome Im begging you to write more. NOW! Please!

I think Im in love with Summer <3

Posted by French_snack 6 years ago Report

Ha! Thanks. :D She does have a certain... magnetism, doesn't she? I think it may be her playfully brazen show of confidence. Or her cheerful naughtiness!

Posted by passingthroughyou 6 years ago Report

Finally able to read this now I have internet that doesn't block anything slighly NSFW.
Another great story with lots of vore and sexy girls. No big surprises this time. I'm looking forward to the next instalment.

Posted by French_snack 6 years ago Report

Thanks. Well, it had to end with pretty girls with stuffed tummies. ;) There'll be some more at some point, yes.