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John and Emma take the train back from an out of town event. unfortunately, it overruns and they get back to the campus just before the hunting hours begin. for John this is no big deal, he is a wolf, but for his girlfriend Emma, well let's just hope she isn't a deer in the headlights.
got a lot of enjoyment reading over a few of BizzareBlue 's anthro stuff about a week ago, so I decided to try my own spin in the setting, I hope they don't mind, I just had an itch and a 5-hour train ride, so this just kind of happened.
I wanted to try something a little unconventional, and I wrote this on my phone, so I assume its got some pretty bad grammar issues, but I think I got most of them.
my next project is a commission. so expect something pony and cock vore in the next week.
thumbnail source: https://www.furaffinity.net/view/21686751/
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Posted by Bright 5 years ago Report
A very well written story I say.
Posted by doomfister 5 years ago Report
i went over it again and clipped a few more errors. all in all i thought it would be a interesting story to write, as i could imagine it as a plausible scenario in the world BizzareBlue has crafted. i am glad you enjoyed it.
Posted by BizzareBlue 5 years ago Report
Oh, that was amazing. I spent the majority of it wondering if he was really going to let her go or if something would come up to change his mind / prevent him from doing so. Really enjoyed every moment of this and am thrilled to hear that I inspired something so awesome.
Posted by doomfister 5 years ago Report
yeah, the whole story is busting the idea that o' she got ate, well she is getting digested. in a vore legal society like the one you created the preds are just people, same with the prey, albeit it with a new dichotomy thrown into the mix.
because of this there is the possibility of real relationships occurring across species and in some cases between predators and prey. as was the case here, though Emma felt great inside him, John rejected the natural course of action, as he valued the deer more then as a friend then a meal.
i can imagine things like this being much more common in fields where pred and prey are forced to interact in a environment where they cannot eat each other during the hunting hours. like i can envision some really strong relationships forming in say paramedic ambulance units, as in a sane world they would be exempt from predation, as its like the common curtesty of pulling over to the side of the road for ambulances. you dont eat the ambulance staff as you never know when you might need them, so you wouldn't want to get black listed.
this would mean that predators would form legitimate relationships with prey, and because of this perhaps regard them as something more then food. its a fun little idea your works got me pondering, and as such i wrote this story, and may in the future do a few more.
i would like to say i am chuffed you liked it, and i hope i have your permission to use the setting again in the future if my fancy gets tickled.
Posted by UnknownGamer21 5 years ago Report
I love these two, may I ask. How many stories do you plan to make with these two love-animals? :3
Posted by doomfister 5 years ago Report
not exactly sure, more then the ones i have done, and i have 3 planned to do at some point. thing is i have 30 or so stories planned to do, so its more a when then an if.
Posted by Niyellie 5 years ago Report
HA! I never thought I'd see the day I got my art stolen. I kinda wanna say I'm flattered.
I do wanna say, if you're gonna use Niye's image, at least make her the pred. Ruminant bellies are most unforgiving.
Posted by doomfister 5 years ago Report
XD I just typed in Deer anthro, into google and this was the first image I got that I felt was serviceable for how I imagined Emma to look like. for some reason nearly all Doe anthros are blonde, so i had to spend a little longer looking for a thumbnail.
I have to agree with you on Ruminant bellies, they are a fun concept and something I have considered using at some point, the aspect of cud and the fact they smell like a septic tank, add a couple of elements to it. multiple stomachs also gives you something to play with. ;)
I apologize for not giving a link to the thumbnail, but the site I found it on didn't have a source, would you like me to post your own line to it in the description?
Posted by Niyellie 5 years ago Report
Ruminant stomachs are bae. <3 Keep your pet locked away for an entire week before they're just bones. Even more fun if you add micro play in there, considering the absurd control ruminants have over their esophagus and first two stomachs. Just keep your pet in there, hork 'em up every so often, clean 'em up, feed 'em, give them false hope for freedom, send 'em right back down.
But yeah I ain't mad. Again, I actually find it flattering to see my stuff being used. I only ask that you ask permission from the owner of a piece, and link a source.
And yeah, I get that the image isn't sourced from where you scrapped it up this time, which is irritating to me, but here we go: https://www.furaffinity.net/view/21686751/ that's my FA and a link right to the piece. Granted I don't have the artist's link, but that's 'cause they were working from Facebook at the time, and I've entirely lost Wolfyroxy from that point. Don't even think she uses that name anymore.
Anyway, if you wanna keep using Niye's pics for Emma, feel free to inquire about it with me. And, heh, if you wanna use Niye in a story, we can absolutely talk.
Posted by doomfister 5 years ago Report
posted the link in the description, its a thing I always try to do, unfortunately, I am sort of an internet trawler, so a lot of what I pick up comes from message boards and the like which I just right click save as I browse. which normally means no links, which is true for quite a few of my MLP thumbnails. again I apologize, but its the nature of the internet, for stuff to flow around it, just look at PD's old works, all that stuff was behind a paywall, and somehow it is all still readily available, and no one knows the original site.
if you have some suggestions for plots involving Niye, I would love to hear them, seeing as your clearly a big der fan I am sure you have given it a lot of thought, which means some exotic plotlines. pop us a DM/PM and we can discuss ideas, as I have been pondering deer pred for quite some time. :)