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Tags: Anthro Anthro Pred Anthro Prey anthropomorphic Deer Digestion Digestion Noises F/F Failed Vore Fatal Female Prey Furry hunter becomes the hunted Implied Disposal interrupted M/F Multiple Preds Multiple Preys Non-fatal Oral Vore pred becomes prey Rat rat pred Rat Prey rat/vole vole vole prey Wolf Pred Wolf predator wolf/rat writing
A few weeks after his adventure with Emma, John has to do a favor for the vole friend of his doe companion, what happens next could only be described as mistakes were made.
this is the sequel to Train Trouble, which can be found here: https://aryion.com/g4/view/491107
a second story based in the world built by the wonderful BizzareBlue I got the itch again, and worked on this on the side as I was doing a commission, the commission should be done in the next few days then on to 1.16.
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Posted by Fischie 6 years ago Report
The link to the previous story leads back to this one.
Posted by doomfister 6 years ago Report
thanks, fixed the link.
Posted by LordDantai 6 years ago Report
Great follow on on from Train Trouble. Will/Could we see more of John, Amber and Emma
Side note; link in your description leads back here not to train trouble.
Posted by doomfister 6 years ago Report
I am positive i will be continuing this story. I like the idea of a pred/prey couple, and their misadventures in a vore infested world, so I will definitely not drop the concept.
Thanks, for pointing out the link issue, I was at work and we are not allowed phones on site, so I couldn't fix it until I got home.
Posted by Philosoraptor 6 years ago Report
Though I have to admit I prefer your stories of humans be preyed upon by more realistic predators, this is still one of the better 'furry vore' stories with good description and realistic prey to predator size ratios (unlike many others). Plus it always makes more sense to use real predatory animals as the predators instead of obvious herbivores as we see in many others. One thing that might be regarded as a typo, was that you probably meant it was an 'astronomy' lecture instead of an 'astrology' lecture given the fact that you also mentioned it would be about quasars instead of magic.
Posted by doomfister 6 years ago Report
thanks for pointing that out, it has been corrected now, I made the mistake of assuming it was right before checking.
Posted by Combat 6 years ago Report
I've got to admit, I'm quite enjoying this series so far.
Posted by doomfister 6 years ago Report
i am glad you are enjoying it, what aspects are you enjoying if you dont mind me asking?
Posted by Combat 6 years ago Report
How you explore the aspects of what daily life must be like in this world is a major thing for me. I'm a huge plot person and the fact that several of BizzareBlue's stories set in this world were commissioned by me doesn't hurt either.
Posted by doomfister 6 years ago Report
I love my plot and fluff too, but most people seem to be more interested in fetish part, but to me, the build-up is just as important.
I quite enjoy the ideas BizzareBlue had set in motion as it to me seemed like a more believable world than most vore stories. no rabbit preds and the like, so you had to win the genetic lottery to not have to worry about becoming a victim of a grab and gulp.
I have ideas for prey who might not be easily ingestable, specifically hedgehogs, porcupines, turtles, and tortoises. as I think their perspective on the world would be interesting to observe as they are a prey who can walk the streets and not one pred would touch them as they would be impossible to wolf down.
also, a cool predator would be a terrapin, it's a small pred, but it has a wide shell so would be next to impossible to ingest. because of this, I feel I could write a fun story with one just waltzing around town at night and maybe nabbing a shrew or mouse, with banter and interactions from predators mixed in.
Posted by Combat 6 years ago Report
I'm the same, the vore part is not the main focus, the plot is. And in this world, the interactions between predators and prey has so much potential.
Posted by doomfister 6 years ago Report
you cannot go wrong with fluff and i am sure my future stories will continue to tickle your fancy as i will explore these elements.
Posted by TestAccountPleaseIgnore 3 years ago Report
Hey, are you still interested in "interesting predator concepts" and/or writing pieces set in BizzareBlue's universe?
Posted by doomfister 3 years ago Report
I'm always interested in exotic preds, and Bizzareblue's world, but right now i am forging my own adventures in "the house of coils,". Though i would love to hear what your mulling :)
Posted by TestAccountPleaseIgnore 3 years ago Report
Well, you seem interested in the concept of a predator that can't be eaten by other predators. However, what about a predator that can't even be detected, at least by prey?
Enter the fully-carnivorous grasshopper mouse. It already eats normal mice in real life, it's visually indistinguishable from a normal mouse in real life (even its teeth are the same), and it can literally howl like a wolf.
In BizzareBlue's universe, I imagine that translates to a predator completely disguised as another mouse, which leads to so, so many opportunities for betrayal and such. For instance, they look exactly like a normal mouse, up until they lock the door behind you and you realize how screwed you are.
Sure, other predators will treat them like a mouse and try to eat them, but they'd do that anyway - and at least this one can blend in with their prey.
Posted by doomfister 3 years ago Report
Ah, that could be fun, I have heard of Grasshopper mice before, but not considered them for a vore scenerio. Perhaps i will dabble in the future, though it would likely be in the house of coils setting i am developing with Narrows, though currently we have i belive two additional lemons in the works regarding that, plus a character concept, so it might be a while before i get to giving a petite predator a tap ;)
Posted by Bright 6 years ago Report
I think you have a really good way of building the characters.
Posted by doomfister 6 years ago Report
I just write them like people, give them goals and a short backstory and roll from there. a lot better then just "I like to eat people" wouldn't you agree XD.
Posted by Combat 6 years ago Report
We need more of Emma and John.
Posted by doomfister 6 years ago Report
in time, i have a few stories in mind, but right now i am scratching a few of my itches that have been sitting. one problem with having a million ideas and drafts is that i have to pick one to see through.
Posted by Combat 6 years ago Report
Or become a legend by doing them all :D
Posted by doomfister 6 years ago Report
that would probably kill me XD
Posted by Combat 6 years ago Report
Becoming a Legend requires sacrifice after all :P
Posted by doomfister 6 years ago Report
perhaps, I will definitely do them, but as I normally say it's a matter of when not if.
Posted by led 5 years ago Report
are there anymore stories with these characters in it?
Posted by doomfister 5 years ago Report
https://aryion.com/g4/view/491107
this is the only other one
Posted by led 5 years ago Report
do you plan on making more?
Posted by doomfister 5 years ago Report
Not currently
Posted by alockwood1 2 years ago Report
Interesting.
Posted by doomfister 2 years ago Report
Indeed, one of my older works, I got an itch and scratched it with a few stories, Maybe one day I will revisit it ;)
Posted by alockwood1 2 years ago Report
I know how that goes. Got something I'm working on that's set in a universe I created prior to 2009.
Posted by doomfister 2 years ago Report
Fair play, I will eventually dabble again, but we shall see, got anthros up next on my agenda though ;)
Posted by alockwood1 2 years ago Report
Sometimes new things like to say "Hello" though.
Posted by doomfister 2 years ago Report
O yes ;)
Posted by alockwood1 2 years ago Report
Yeah.