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Escort Mission By doomfister

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A few weeks after his adventure with Emma, John has to do a favor for the vole friend of his doe companion, what happens next could only be described as mistakes were made.

this is the sequel to Train Trouble, which can be found here: https://aryion.com/g4/view/491107

a second story based in the world built by the wonderful  BizzareBlue I got the itch again, and worked on this on the side as I was doing a commission, the commission should be done in the next few days then on to 1.16.

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Fischie

Posted by Fischie 6 days ago

The link to the previous story leads back to this one.

doomfister

Posted by doomfister 5 days ago

thanks, fixed the link.

LordDantai

Posted by LordDantai 6 days ago

Great follow on on from Train Trouble. Will/Could we see more of John, Amber and Emma

Side note; link in your description leads back here not to train trouble.

doomfister

Posted by doomfister 5 days ago

I am positive i will be continuing this story. I like the idea of a pred/prey couple, and their misadventures in a vore infested world, so I will definitely not drop the concept.

Thanks, for pointing out the link issue, I was at work and we are not allowed phones on site, so I couldn't fix it until I got home.

Philosoraptor

Posted by Philosoraptor 5 days ago

Though I have to admit I prefer your stories of humans be preyed upon by more realistic predators, this is still one of the better 'furry vore' stories with good description and realistic prey to predator size ratios (unlike many others). Plus it always makes more sense to use real predatory animals as the predators instead of obvious herbivores as we see in many others. One thing that might be regarded as a typo, was that you probably meant it was an 'astronomy' lecture instead of an 'astrology' lecture given the fact that you also mentioned it would be about quasars instead of magic.

doomfister

Posted by doomfister 5 days ago

thanks for pointing that out, it has been corrected now, I made the mistake of assuming it was right before checking.

Combat

Posted by Combat 5 days ago

I've got to admit, I'm quite enjoying this series so far.

doomfister

Posted by doomfister 4 days ago

i am glad you are enjoying it, what aspects are you enjoying if you dont mind me asking?

Combat

Posted by Combat 4 days ago

How you explore the aspects of what daily life must be like in this world is a major thing for me. I'm a huge plot person and the fact that several of BizzareBlue's stories set in this world were commissioned by me doesn't hurt either.

doomfister

Posted by doomfister 4 days ago

I love my plot and fluff too, but most people seem to be more interested in fetish part, but to me, the build-up is just as important.

I quite enjoy the ideas BizzareBlue had set in motion as it to me seemed like a more believable world than most vore stories. no rabbit preds and the like, so you had to win the genetic lottery to not have to worry about becoming a victim of a grab and gulp.


I have ideas for prey who might not be easily ingestable, specifically hedgehogs, porcupines, turtles, and tortoises. as I think their perspective on the world would be interesting to observe as they are a prey who can walk the streets and not one pred would touch them as they would be impossible to wolf down.

also, a cool predator would be a terrapin, it's a small pred, but it has a wide shell so would be next to impossible to ingest. because of this, I feel I could write a fun story with one just waltzing around town at night and maybe nabbing a shrew or mouse, with banter and interactions from predators mixed in.

Combat

Posted by Combat 4 days ago

I'm the same, the vore part is not the main focus, the plot is. And in this world, the interactions between predators and prey has so much potential.

doomfister

Posted by doomfister 3 days ago

you cannot go wrong with fluff and i am sure my future stories will continue to tickle your fancy as i will explore these elements.

Bright

Posted by Bright 4 days ago

I think you have a really good way of building the characters.

doomfister

Posted by doomfister 3 days ago

I just write them like people, give them goals and a short backstory and roll from there. a lot better then just "I like to eat people" wouldn't you agree XD.