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Holidays can be important for many reasons, but one very happy thing about them is meeting extended family members you love but don't see every day.

So next time you see your cute cousin, maybe stop to chat and see if you have any interests in common.




Oh wow, I uploaded a thing! I wonder if this will continue.

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LordDantai

Posted by LordDantai 1 year ago Report

It is always a gift getting to read your stories and this one is not an exception. The pacing felt rushed but still was a fun read.

IndifferentEmpath

Posted by IndifferentEmpath 1 year ago Report

Yeah the vore part was really short. It was partly because I had him talking dirty to her throughout the sex, partly because I haven't written in some time and partly because I'm somewhat bored with describing people being eaten at this point. It doesn't change a whole lot when talking about humans eating humans, so I did skimp on details.

LordDantai

Posted by LordDantai 1 year ago Report

Actually, the pacing I was talking about was not the vore scene, but the beginning and lead up. It is a difficult thing to describe, but at some points it would feel like the pacing would build up to one thing but the suddenly be cut off and jumped to something else. There were a few 'and' sentences that would go for just a smidge too long. It gave me the feeling of a story that was done in a single sitting, not all of it, when it did flow, it flowed smoothly.

Again, loved the story and I always enjoy good wholesome family fun ;)

rugli

Posted by rugli 1 year ago Report

Lovely might have sequel idea if you are interested.

IndifferentEmpath

Posted by IndifferentEmpath 1 year ago Report

Thanks, please feel free to share.

MidNightOwlArt

Posted by MidNightOwlArt 1 year ago Report

I agree, the ending was a bit rush for the sex scene but still great nonetheless :D
I enjoyed it.

MidNightOwlArt

Posted by MidNightOwlArt 1 year ago Report

Btw is there any chance you can make a Female pred version of this story? I’m sure i’m not the only one to think this idea and i’ll enjoy it the same as the male pred but i just wanted to throw it out there Incase you had a idea for it.
If you don’t want you that fine i was just asking.
I still enjoy a male pred now or then.

IndifferentEmpath

Posted by IndifferentEmpath 1 year ago Report

Probably not this story as it had so much sex in it. I know people like F/F, don't worry, I will write more of that too. I just like to give the prey a good dicking every now and then.

rubuio91

Posted by rubuio91 1 year ago Report

Exceptional story as always

IndifferentEmpath

Posted by IndifferentEmpath 1 year ago Report

Thanks!

chronicles1001

Posted by chronicles1001 1 year ago Report

Nice to see your back
Looking forward to future works

IndifferentEmpath

Posted by IndifferentEmpath 1 year ago Report

Thanks! I'll try to get some more stuff out over the holidays.

RediQ

Posted by RediQ 1 year ago Report

Hehe, it takes a lot to get me into something that prominently revolves around straight sex, but... something about the interaction with these two worked terribly well and it was super pleasant to read <3

IndifferentEmpath

Posted by IndifferentEmpath 1 year ago Report

Thanks, glad you liked it!

ShadesofBlack

Posted by ShadesofBlack 1 year ago Report

Ah geez. This was lovely, especially the ending!
Very erotic as well as sweet.

IndifferentEmpath

Posted by IndifferentEmpath 1 year ago Report

Thanks, I do like a good sex scene before or after the eating. Hmm, maybe I should make one during.

Plgc

Posted by Plgc 1 year ago Report

Set you're my favorite author, I'm so glad to see you back! And with such a fantastic story too!!

Plgc

Posted by Plgc 1 year ago Report

No "set" thanks SwiftKey for making me incoherent as always

IndifferentEmpath

Posted by IndifferentEmpath 1 year ago Report

Thanks, glad you liked it. Already working on some more stories so stay tuned!

MugenNoSaga

Posted by MugenNoSaga 1 year ago Report

Very good casual story, It's nice to read more of your stories ♥

Choco0

Posted by Choco0 1 year ago Report

Nice !