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Holidays can be important for many reasons, but one very happy thing about them is meeting extended family members you love but don't see every day.
So next time you see your cute cousin, maybe stop to chat and see if you have any interests in common.
Oh wow, I uploaded a thing! I wonder if this will continue.
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Posted by LordDantai 6 years ago Report
It is always a gift getting to read your stories and this one is not an exception. The pacing felt rushed but still was a fun read.
Posted by IndifferentEmpath 6 years ago Report
Yeah the vore part was really short. It was partly because I had him talking dirty to her throughout the sex, partly because I haven't written in some time and partly because I'm somewhat bored with describing people being eaten at this point. It doesn't change a whole lot when talking about humans eating humans, so I did skimp on details.
Posted by LordDantai 6 years ago Report
Actually, the pacing I was talking about was not the vore scene, but the beginning and lead up. It is a difficult thing to describe, but at some points it would feel like the pacing would build up to one thing but the suddenly be cut off and jumped to something else. There were a few 'and' sentences that would go for just a smidge too long. It gave me the feeling of a story that was done in a single sitting, not all of it, when it did flow, it flowed smoothly.
Again, loved the story and I always enjoy good wholesome family fun ;)
Posted by rugli 6 years ago Report
Lovely might have sequel idea if you are interested.
Posted by IndifferentEmpath 6 years ago Report
Thanks, please feel free to share.
Posted by MidNightOwlArt 6 years ago Report
I agree, the ending was a bit rush for the sex scene but still great nonetheless :D
I enjoyed it.
Posted by MidNightOwlArt 6 years ago Report
Btw is there any chance you can make a Female pred version of this story? I’m sure i’m not the only one to think this idea and i’ll enjoy it the same as the male pred but i just wanted to throw it out there Incase you had a idea for it.
If you don’t want you that fine i was just asking.
I still enjoy a male pred now or then.
Posted by IndifferentEmpath 6 years ago Report
Probably not this story as it had so much sex in it. I know people like F/F, don't worry, I will write more of that too. I just like to give the prey a good dicking every now and then.
Posted by rubuio91 6 years ago Report
Exceptional story as always
Posted by IndifferentEmpath 6 years ago Report
Thanks!
Posted by chronicles1001 6 years ago Report
Nice to see your back
Looking forward to future works
Posted by IndifferentEmpath 6 years ago Report
Thanks! I'll try to get some more stuff out over the holidays.
Posted by RediQ 6 years ago Report
Hehe, it takes a lot to get me into something that prominently revolves around straight sex, but... something about the interaction with these two worked terribly well and it was super pleasant to read <3
Posted by IndifferentEmpath 6 years ago Report
Thanks, glad you liked it!
Posted by ShadesofBlack 6 years ago Report
Ah geez. This was lovely, especially the ending!
Very erotic as well as sweet.
Posted by IndifferentEmpath 6 years ago Report
Thanks, I do like a good sex scene before or after the eating. Hmm, maybe I should make one during.
Posted by Plgc 6 years ago Report
Set you're my favorite author, I'm so glad to see you back! And with such a fantastic story too!!
Posted by Plgc 6 years ago Report
No "set" thanks SwiftKey for making me incoherent as always
Posted by IndifferentEmpath 6 years ago Report
Thanks, glad you liked it. Already working on some more stories so stay tuned!
Posted by MugenNoSaga 6 years ago Report
Very good casual story, It's nice to read more of your stories ♥
Posted by Choco0 6 years ago Report
Nice !
Posted by Randomdude5 5 years ago Report
I like this story it felt almost romantic but the ending felt rushed.
Posted by Rokka 4 years ago Report
I have been wondering for a while where you get you thumbnails from. They are very well done and fit you story well. I would love to see the full sized thumbnail for this story.