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Lady Felicity Foxcroft, a member of the predatory aristocracy, is targeted by a group of rebel rabbits, intent on serving up justice for her many meals. And if there's one thing a noble fox enjoys, it's being served by rabbits...
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Posted by ChaoskampfNunc 5 years ago Report
I sure do love absoutely shameless predators
Posted by maleperduis 5 years ago Report
Feeling shame is one of those things the servant classes do, like gardening or eating food that doesn't scream. Lady Felicity is aware of it, but sees no reason to partake.
Glad you enjoyed, and thanks for the comment!
Posted by ChaoskampfNunc 5 years ago Report
Where's the fun if they don't struggle and whimper as they digest? <3
No problem, hope to see more!
Posted by Anashi 5 years ago Report
o.o
Posted by maleperduis 5 years ago Report
I hope you learned a lot about fox-bunny interactions
Posted by DancingWithLiars 5 years ago Report
Ooh, this is certainly exciting. Can't wait for the next part!
Posted by maleperduis 5 years ago Report
Thanks! Hopefully coming soon
Posted by Philosoraptor 5 years ago Report
Well written and fun little story so far, and looking forward to Part 2. One thing that doesn't seem clear though is how the rabbits could possibly think they could kidnap the larger predator without apparently any kind of weapons to force her to cooperate? This seems to be set in modern times given they plan to take her away in a van so even if the rabbits are extremely non-violent one thinks they would at least be equipped with some non-lethal means of defense like a stun gun, before embarking on such a dangerous venture. Thanks for sharing!
Posted by maleperduis 5 years ago Report
Glad you enjoyed! And yes, that's a good question it's something I've thought about myself too. I'm in two minds about whether to give them weapons and show her easily outmaneuvering and disarming them, or not. The justification for the latter is that, well, it's a manifestly cartoony and silly story, so why worry about realism on that particular detail?
Posted by IsistheKitsune 5 years ago Report
When will chapter 2 come?
Posted by wolfSnack 4 years ago Report
Can't wait for part 2~
Posted by MarkusFreeman320 3 years ago Report
Me neither, that and half-life 3 XD
Posted by Bright 3 years ago Report
Really love the shameless cartoony feel of this story.
Posted by zacriac 1 year ago Report
I love it when preds burp out their preys clothing! So hawt!