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Based on silentfate's A Vore Dawn game... and far, FAR too long in the making. In fact, the ending might be something of a crapshoot. But... fuck, I need SOMETHING done by the end of the year, am I right? Hopefully, this will inspire me to get out of my writer's block. I'll be doing my obligatory New Year's Eve story next, and the lack of lewds should help keep me focused and actually finish the damn thing.
Taking place in the early, EARLY legs of the game (as in, before things get "truly good"), Hailey (the player character) and Fiona, the princess of a now-ruined kingdom, are on the run. They run into an unusual woman along the way, with an equally unusual idea. In this story, though, things take a turn for the lesbian...
For an idea of how long this one took, I think I started this back in... 2016. 2016. And there was an alternate version planned (although both this and the semi-scrapped alternate are non-fatal), but for the sake of kicking myself in the pants, this is the only version available: One prey and then the other. I can come up with a whole host of excuses as to why I never got this done (the game itself being on the rough side for my tastes, updates, RL stuff) but when it comes down to it in my opinion, better late than never.
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Posted by acrylic 6 years ago Report
I liked the succubus ub scene in the game
Posted by DangZerglings 6 years ago Report
Is that the one in the monster town? Its name escapes me at the time of this posting.
Posted by acrylic 6 years ago Report
Yes
You should write that a story too
Posted by Groblek 6 years ago Report
Ooh, fun! I think this turned out quite well - even not knowing anything about the game it’s based on, it’s a very fun read. I did notice that while the dryad promised they’d be OK, there was no mention of just how long their stay inside her would be - though spending a season or two in a dryad’s womb probaby would be a very good way to throw any pursuers off their trail. :)
Also, my sympathies on the story taking a long time to write, I’ve had more than a few of mine that take years to finally get down the way I want them.
Posted by Apostolos 5 years ago Report
I hope you can eventually make a continuation of this, maybe they stay long enough that Hailey becomes able to unbirth Fiona, before they continue