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Erf, I actually missed the deadline for posting this by about two hours, despite giving myself three days to work on a single page per week. Unfortunately my living situation had me kicked out of the place over the exact three days I had allocated for this, for long periods of time. So when I was actually able to work on this I just had trouble getting into writing and drawing.
I apologise if the content is a little lackluster, I even left the picture in a rough state without cleaning up all the lines. I believe it's probably a bit lacking since it's kinda... longer than I usually make each page. Which isn't always a good thing.
Anyway, the wolf's prey is kind of an odd case since I never actually thought about what was in the beast's gut. I kinda ended up writing myself into a corner by implying that the prey had been smol'd, and ended up going with some kind of "dryad" or "forest-kin" who's height & growth would be almost directly influenced by her surroundings. And because I was pretty much rushing her without really thinking about her appearance, she came out a bit... loli & fully clothed. tbh, she should look more like the Minish from LoZ in her smaller state, but I just didn't want to/couldn't devote the time to really work on her looks right now.
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Name:
Status:
Strength: 4 (3)
Constitution: 3
Dexterity: 3
Agility: 3
Intelligence: 3
Resistance: 3
Charisma: 3
Budding Predator:
Packrat:
Pink Civilian outfit
250 Gold
Old One's Sword
- Unbreakable
Iron Dagger
n/a
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I have a discord server for the interactive which is slowly filling out~ Feel free to join if you want to potentially help out, or just talk. Whichever works: xzAuU5P
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Posted by AwokenedWispKP 5 years ago Report
Again, Sorry if this isn't as good as it could've been.
Posted by Kartomic 5 years ago Report
No worries. I hope you are feeling better!
Posted by AnominableBreadman 5 years ago Report
Whoa, only a few minutes after I favorite you and I get to see an update, good on you, I'll be happy to join in on the fun in discord since I've been missing out, let me catch up and then I'll give you my input~
Posted by AwokenedWispKP 5 years ago Report
The discord is still fairly tiny and inactive, and is absolutely a work in progress.
But I begin working on each update starting Friday and can post it anywhere between Friday to Sunday unless something comes up or I've decided to speed up the pace temporarily... which I'll generally bring up as sort of a warning beforehand.
Posted by stevebat 5 years ago Report
That there is one cute plantgirl. I wonder if she knows any good magic
Posted by Rayen 5 years ago Report
>Flirt with smol cute :U
Posted by Kartomic 5 years ago Report
Offer a hug, or a belly-pillow to lay her head on. :D
Posted by Rantroper 5 years ago Report
I also vote flirt. You need to make friends and it's not every day you come across someone fine with your predding ability. While you're at it, see if there's anything you can do to help her situation
Posted by Jogoon 5 years ago Report
Ask the sprite if she can heal our wounds. If she can't try to stand up and find something to bandage. If there isn't anything around that would work we could try using our clothes, though I would rather not turn those into bandages if possible. Depending on how hard it would be to move we could try continuing down the path, but before that we should ask the sprite about the surrounding area and where this road leads. Also ask for name.
Posted by Jogoon 5 years ago Report
I forgot to say that if we can't move on yet, chat more with the sprite while we relax rubbing our belly. Ask her about the sword and why she is interested in it. Ask if she knows anything about the shrine where we found it. And ask her about herself and where she came from.
Posted by Eboros 5 years ago Report
seconded !
Posted by Jamesbrid 5 years ago Report
Well poor wolfs gone(doubt lyra has stomach control, also hungry), ally can grow plants very usefull for food, ask about the sword this sounds like a serious problem magic being drained, then continue along the path.
Posted by Jamesbrid 5 years ago Report
Wait does she have a wolf tail!?
Posted by Kartomic 5 years ago Report
Hmm, the sprite does look like she has a tail!
Posted by AwokenedWispKP 5 years ago Report
She kinda ended up a bit of a patchwork job for the time being due to essentially having no real time to focus on her looks. She's also supposed to have visible ears as well.
Posted by AnominableBreadman 5 years ago Report
Ask the sprite her name, thanking her for the pointer and ask if she can heal us, maybe even ask if she would like to come with her now that the threat of the wolf is gone. She seems like a nice person to have around.
Posted by Iyari 5 years ago Report
Ask about any ideas for healing your wounds, ask about more info on the sword, and/or flirt with the cute
Posted by Sergit 5 years ago Report
She was sent here tocheck on this area? I'd vote to ask her: "Who sent you here?"
Also, pat her head, because she seems like a good girl.
Posted by Graywolf18 5 years ago Report
Be impressed by her forest magic, ask about possibly healing our woof bites, ask about her task and if we can join her for a bit. If we bed down for the night then we snuggle our new friend. Snuggle with great enthusiasm.
Posted by Kartomic 5 years ago Report
No worries, Wisp: hand in there! <3
Action: See if she's okay and offer her a hug, ask her if she can heal our wounds, ask what she knows about the sword, and what we can do with the wolf while she was in it's gut (unless it was eating it). Finally, see if she knows anything else about vore, and if she has anything to teach us!
First things first, lets make sure the little sprite is okay; ask for her name and offer her a comforting hug. Given how magical she is, she might be able to heal our wounds! Ask her if she knows anything about the sword, and maybe tell her how we came about it: she might be able to give us some answers as to how we got to be where we are. While she was in the wolf's stomach, she mentioned being able to do something with the wolf if we weren't human... what did she mean by that? She also was quite quick to get us to eat that wolf, no doubt an act of vindication by her towards the beast that almost made food out of her. We should see if she knows anything else about being a 'predator', and if she can teach us anything more about it!
Posted by AwokenedWispKP 5 years ago Report
Erm, it might just be best just to do the fluff. I'm actually finding it easier to understand them than you essentially writing it twice since your short version tends to cut out some of the important information, not just the actual fluff that's a bit unrelated.
Also, it was implied that she meant "Eat the wolf", as humans are almost never born with the ability to pred.
Posted by Kartomic 5 years ago Report
Ahh, gotcha. I'll only do fluff, then, my bad.
Posted by AwokenedWispKP 5 years ago Report
No... just have a detailed comment. Fluff is meant to be unrelated to the actual thing.
Posted by Kartomic 5 years ago Report
I think I've been misunderstanding what you mean by fluff, and what you actually want to see is details?
Posted by AwokenedWispKP 5 years ago Report
Fluff is essentially unnecessary detail or unrelated to the topic.
Posted by Kartomic 5 years ago Report
Gotcha.
Posted by AwokenedWispKP 5 years ago Report
Or you know, Unnecessary.
Posted by JScofi 5 years ago Report
sit put and digest your first ever meal (to your memory) and chat with the forest spirit, try to get as much information as you can on .... anything really, we don't know much.