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Two brave young men find themselves in a precarious situation when they attract the attention of the beautiful Amber Adams. They know she's trouble - but they could never have imagined just the kind of game she's playing...
This is a story I commissioned by the remarkably talented VaguenessIncoming and currently my favorite piece of vore fiction. He portrayed her so beautifully to how I envision her. I seriously can't even.
Please check out his work, he has a store called Snakethroat Books!
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Posted by NeyNey 6 years ago Report
Yah it's a really good story. Love Amber's dialogue.
Posted by HipHugger 6 years ago Report
XD I know, she kills me
Posted by Narkotic 6 years ago Report
Whoa! This was just amazing! I love how Amber manipulates and hypnotizes her prey. It's just so good!
Posted by HipHugger 6 years ago Report
Meee tooooo @_@
Posted by Umhuebr 6 years ago Report
"Amber let out a small hiccup. Ah, memories..."
Amazing story! Hyper talented writing! But, that part, ohh, that part just sells it for me
Posted by HipHugger 6 years ago Report
VI and his nuanced details!
Posted by NightRoller 6 years ago Report
This is the level that I wish I could write at.
I particularly like how ruffled Amber got at the boys' resistance. I only wish that it had been more of a battle of wits and that they'd lasted longer with sentience.
'Tis an excellent (and lengthy) story. I think I found another person to follow.