Hey visitorblack you did a short story called marinette soup it's pretty well written and makes sense but hey have you had plans on a story of princess peach as meat?
That comment's better suited for that story? I get all the comments on all my stories and I try to respond to them all. Other people reading that story would probably prefer to read any comments on it.
I'm actually not sure if I'll ever expand the Marinette soup story. It actually is a full story as it stands. I wouldn't have posted it here otherwise. I wanted to write something short that's all implied cannibalism. I had a few ideas, but this one jumped out at me.
I like it ending where it is, but I also sort of want to write more?
I could probably expand it, but I don't actually have any ideas right now on how. I also don't really know what to do with it to make it better than my April O'Neill soup story. And I have my commissions.
Nice description.
Shouldn't she be happy, when someone sees her, so she can get help?
Would be interesting, if people wouldn't thing about helping.
I also would have preferred an ending with vore, didn't read the tags before.
Posted by jun1337 5 years ago Report
Love a good knotting
Posted by Squidpad 5 years ago Report
Not my cup of tea, just had to comment on how little you fuck around with titles. I respect being straight to the point.
Posted by TheVisitorBlack 5 years ago Report
You get exactly what it says on the tin. That way readers can read what they enjoy and skip what they don't.
Posted by Squidpad 5 years ago Report
Wish there were more writers like you
Posted by TheVisitorBlack 5 years ago Report
Thanks! That's really nice of you!
Posted by 10younameit 5 years ago Report
Hey visitorblack you did a short story called marinette soup it's pretty well written and makes sense but hey have you had plans on a story of princess peach as meat?
Posted by TheVisitorBlack 5 years ago Report
0 plans. I'm taking commissions now and I needed to write a short palate cleanser to get my head in the zone for that.
Posted by 10younameit 5 years ago Report
Just asking okay
Posted by 10younameit 5 years ago Report
Hey visitorblack you that short story called marinette soup are you planing on maming that a full story sometime in the future
Posted by TheVisitorBlack 5 years ago Report
That comment's better suited for that story? I get all the comments on all my stories and I try to respond to them all. Other people reading that story would probably prefer to read any comments on it.
I'm actually not sure if I'll ever expand the Marinette soup story. It actually is a full story as it stands. I wouldn't have posted it here otherwise. I wanted to write something short that's all implied cannibalism. I had a few ideas, but this one jumped out at me.
I like it ending where it is, but I also sort of want to write more?
I could probably expand it, but I don't actually have any ideas right now on how. I also don't really know what to do with it to make it better than my April O'Neill soup story. And I have my commissions.
So, for now it works fine as is.
Posted by porky11 5 years ago Report
Nice description.
Shouldn't she be happy, when someone sees her, so she can get help?
Would be interesting, if people wouldn't thing about helping.
I also would have preferred an ending with vore, didn't read the tags before.
Posted by TheVisitorBlack 5 years ago Report
If she were thinking logically, sure. But she's more worried about the embarrassment of being seen and humiliated.