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Tags: ai ebihara aika nakamura ayane matsunaga castwipe Chie Satonaka Digestion Disposal Female Prey M/F M/multiple prey Male Pred Margaret (Persona) Marie Multiple Preys Naoto Shirogane Oral Vore Persona Persona 4 Rise Kujikawa sayoko uehara Scat second person Second Person POV Weight Gain writing Yu Narukami Yukiko Amagi yumi ozawa
Or perhaps better titled "You and the girls of Inaba"!
This was a little experiment, both in multiprey, story structure and perspective. selfrog purchased this as a commission but gave me some creative range to mess around.
The basic idea was to create a series of short vignettes, about 400-500 words each, describing a second person perspective of You/Yu devouring the various tasty girls of Persona 4. I might dabble in making something similar for P3 or P5 in the future, if I have the time, or someone commissions it.
also holy hell thats some serious tagbloat
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Posted by radmann 6 years ago Report
>might do something for P5
OOOH BOY!
Posted by radmann 6 years ago Report
Not to undersell this story short, because this was absolutely wonderful and everything I look for in a story! Top quality like all your Persona writings!
Posted by DeadStrategicCactus 6 years ago Report
Seeing this repeated for P3 and P% would be pretty solid, but if those never come to be that's fine because this was pretty well done. Cast wipes are underrated and this was a fine addition to the small amount of content to it on the portal.
Posted by Parabola0 6 years ago Report
more like cast wipe-off-your-ass amirite
Posted by DeadStrategicCactus 6 years ago Report
Absolutely.
Posted by Parabola0 6 years ago Report
Thank you, I wanted to try and throw in as many of those as I can, and kind of match the tone of the persona 4 narration and gameplay, although just repeating the same stuff over and over again got a lil samey. Figured this story would be right up your alley though!
Posted by The_Prof 6 years ago Report
hmmm I wonder how this would play out in a mirror version where the girls took turns with Yu (and some frequent use of Balm of Life)
Regardless great story
Posted by ZRex030 6 years ago Report
I gotta say, this site needs way more first person vore.
Posted by Lordtiroth 6 years ago Report
Well, that was fun to read. It's in second person, though, not first.
Third person: Yu ate her.
Second person: You ate her.
First person: I ate her.
Posted by Parabola0 6 years ago Report
Thanks, yeah I realized that mistake in hindsight and I have updated the tags and description to fix it.
Posted by anema_sesuna 6 years ago Report
Looks like little nanako was the only girl to excape yu's rampage
Posted by Parabola0 6 years ago Report
imouto is not for eating
Posted by anema_sesuna 6 years ago Report
Shes for headpats
Posted by FanficFetishist 5 years ago Report
Cast clearouts are wonderful. :D
Posted by MickeyDuck 1 year ago Report
I misread Rise as Chie at first so I was like, wow, rude to call Chie a support character. Then I thought the next part implied reloading a previous save, or some kinda respawn mechanic.
Start reading the third part, realize my mistake, go back and read the beginning again. Lol
Really loved this one!
Posted by Parabola0 1 year ago Report
Ah thank you, that go back to load a save concept is actually pretty good, I might keep that in mind for something down the line.