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On a strange land, numerous tiny-sized young women live underground to elude the hungry attention of larger, voracious creatures. The orheslik however, with its long, sticky tongue, is ideally suited to countering such tactics, as this story demonstrates in detail.
This story is also based on a series of conversations I had with the highly talented Jimmypootron (His gallery on DA has mostly giantess-related stuff). He also made a really excellent illustration of the creature in action, which I'll be uploading momentarily!
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Posted by longwayofftiff 6 years ago Report
Kill it with fire!!!!! Eeeeeeek!
Posted by PrinnyDood 6 years ago Report
Haha, I suppose that's a natural reaction from the orheslik's natural food. Gonna need a lot of fire, though.
Posted by longwayofftiff 6 years ago Report
Well I'm sure you wouldn't want to be grabbed by that thing! Oh the story and writing are great. Some of your best. That does in no way detract from the terror of the beasts feeding habits. That could be ME in there. And all my friends or students. Slowly. Digesting. Alive. Ewww no thank you.
Posted by PrinnyDood 6 years ago Report
Yeah, most anyone would understandably want to avoid being consigned into that slimy digestive system. But the orheslik is pretty good at using that tongue to slurp you all up anyway.
Weird alien monsters gotta eat too, I guess.
Posted by Nalzindar 6 years ago Report
Great story, sexy action right from start to finish, well done^^
One might wonder why the tiny people dug their tunnels so close to the surface in the first place, but I guess the story wouldn't become this good in that case. I like Jimmypootron's pictures and think that his fauna seems rather interesting, it was wonderful that you opted to write a story for him :D
Posted by PrinnyDood 6 years ago Report
Thanks!
Yeah, it's possible that miiiight be a little bit of poor planning on the part of the tiny people. Not to mention putting all their attractive ladies in the same place, so close to the surface. Nothing to do with bias from the author though, I assure you. xP
Yeah, when people draw pictures for me, I have a strong tendency to write stories about them. And speaking of, I'm still open to a request or two from you (assuming they fall somewhere inside my 'Kink Venn Diagram'), considering how many of my stories you've wonderfully illustrated. :D
Posted by Nalzindar 6 years ago Report
Thank you for your generous offer and I will certainly keep it in mind.
Posted by longwayofftiff 6 years ago Report
Yeah sorry I failed to make a more poignant comment earlier. I have better composure now. Yes it was a good story but yeah when you're one of these girls it's pretty scary. I vividly imagined this and will likely have a terrible dream about the orheslik now. What a dreadful creature. Being hunted by sticky tongues??!! Why no turret defenses or anything?
Posted by PrinnyDood 6 years ago Report
Ohh, no worries, I feel like I have a pretty good grasp of you meant. Hopefully my kinky writing doesn't disturb your sleep too much though.
I didn't explain in much detail for this, but the people in this aren't terribly advanced/well-armed, so turret defenses are probably well outside their technological grasp.
Posted by jimmypootron 6 years ago Report
This is awesome! Thanks for bringing life to this idea! I love how they think they are safe until the second competitor appears! Not a chance!
Posted by PrinnyDood 6 years ago Report
Thanks! I was happy to do so. Thanks for showing me the fantastic illustration.
Yeah, you can never count on their being just one orheslik, not when such a generous supply of their natural prey is available.
Posted by longwayofftiff 5 years ago Report
Tell us more tales of the orheslik and of the people we're talking about here.
Posted by PrinnyDood 5 years ago Report
You know, I really aught to revisit the orheslik, or some of the other creatures jimmypootron came up with. They do all seem to share an impressive appetite and stomach-capacity, both feature that make a great predator.