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On an island unknown to most of the world, people live their lives in relative prosperity. The only problem with their paradise comes from a massive sea monster hungry for the flesh of anyone who enters the water.
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Posted by ChaoskampfNunc 6 years ago Report
I know for sure I would worship a goddess like that!
Posted by DrakentheBlack 6 years ago Report
Not exactly a benevolent deity, but all the more reason to stay on her good side.
Posted by ChaoskampfNunc 6 years ago Report
Precisely! I'm sure a few sacrifices couldn't hurt too..
Posted by Nalzindar 6 years ago Report
Nice story and a great creature you got there, I wouldn't mind seeing her appearing in other stories as well. Despite eating people, she doesn't seem all too bad either, although ending up naked in a stomach with plenty of dead fish around doesn't seem all to tempting though (and by that I mean the company of the dead fish, the female company is an entirely other matter).
Posted by DrakentheBlack 6 years ago Report
Yeah, she's not a bad girl, she just wants to eat people. I threw in the fish because - she just ate them - I like the idea of prey being tormented in the stomach. Be it a long digestion, tentacle rape, or something else to make their stay unpleasant. But yes, female company is very enjoyable ^^
Posted by Fischie 6 years ago Report
Quite nicely written. I liked the flow of it and how you described the impressions of the prey before and during the feeding.
Posted by DrakentheBlack 6 years ago Report
Thank you :)