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Women Make Great Burgers By ConsumptionZ -- Report

What happens when you get between a man and a good meal? Nothing good of course.

This story features the Ikari Warriors and Woman Fighters teams within the King of Fighters series, and judging by the thumbnail you could probably figure out who's within the spotlight. Ralf is my favorite male character of the series so far, having stellar gameplay, some hilarious interactions with other characters, and being an enormous fan of Metal Slug for so long, the guy is sheerly OP in the games he appears in.

Well Ralph had been on the quest for finding the perfect cheeseburger across the land, taking his teammates along with him and once it had finally been acquired, a meal deserving of a mercenary of justice ends up being more than just interrupted by three particularly pesky women. Think you know what happens next.

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RexLou

Posted by RexLou 6 years ago Report

You definitely know these characters very well! My favorite interactions would probably be Ralf and Leona's, especially when the ladder realizes Ralf's intentions and moves him along in his meals~ I like the post vore a lot here, especially with how you give each of the prey ladies a spotlight as they melt away~

I would have liked a little more visual description, especially of the female warriors at the start of the story, but your overall lack of fluff allowed for an extremely fun and brisk pace. You definitely pleased here and know your M/F well~

ConsumptionZ

Posted by ConsumptionZ 6 years ago Report

Thank you! Might just have to further describe just how scrumptious the meals look in the future!

FanficFetishist

Posted by FanficFetishist 5 years ago Report

And next, Clark gets to eat people. XD

Seriously, though, I love this.

ConsumptionZ

Posted by ConsumptionZ 5 years ago Report

Oh wow thanks! <3

The appetite train must continue hahaha