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A boy's demise By RyouBoy -- Report

A boy gets thrown into an unfamiliar enviroment and something finds him, what could go wrong? ;)

I've been working on and off on this story for a couple months now. I'm quite proud of it and also surprised that I finally managed to finish it.

Kudos to  slaveboymeat for helping me up with the final revision and some touch ups.

Give it a read and lemme know what you think ;)

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slaveboymeat

Posted by slaveboymeat 5 years ago Report

It reminded me so much of my own thoughts and actions I'd have if in the boy's place. Masturbating as death took me, and being aroused until the end. Thank you, Ryou! You've aroused ME as much as your main character was in his ending!

Ratatoskr

Posted by Ratatoskr 5 years ago Report

Epic story, well written and beautifully descibed

roostuf

Posted by roostuf 5 years ago Report

mmmm, yummy boi snacks <3

slinkinginshadows

Posted by slinkinginshadows 5 years ago Report

Yoooooo, really nice! I like how slow the creature was going, really savoring him, and how he gave into being a meal at the end after being so terrified at the start.

RyouBoy

Posted by RyouBoy 5 years ago Report

It makes me really happy that you like it! I feared that the way I tend to really go into and be very descriptive of the more sexual/pornographic aspects of what's going on would be a turn off for you since you tend to leave that stuff for the reader to imagine rather than putting to words how horny your characters are or what they're feeling down there, lol.

zidanes123

Posted by zidanes123 5 years ago Report

very nice

RyouBoy

Posted by RyouBoy 5 years ago Report

Thank you ^^