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This story explains how young Chloe Harwell almost becomes plant food, and instead becomes a member of the Monster Removal Service!
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Posted by PrinnyDood 5 years ago Report
As you know, I really enjoyed this one!
You do an excellent job of characterizing Chloe and developing her backstory, all while keeping the action & descriptions snappy.
Not only does this introduce Chloe well, it's also a really excellent intro to the whole Earth Girls strike Back setting, through Chloe's eyes.
Great work!
Posted by longwayofftiff 5 years ago Report
Thank you so much!! Still working on the next vignette, I'll need to do the story where they actually get the ship. Then they need a first mission.
Posted by PrinnyDood 5 years ago Report
Ohh, that sounds really intriguing! Getting that ship has gotta be the initial catalyst that sets them off on this alien-fighting path.
Posted by Nalzindar 5 years ago Report
This seems almost like a scrip taken from a horror movie, well done! You have done an incredible detailed and good work explaining Chloe's background here. I am looking forwards to see more from the Monster Removal Service.
Posted by longwayofftiff 5 years ago Report
Thank you for the compliments! Yes more is on the way!