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Jen seems to have misplaced her girlfriend at a house party. Being drunk isn't helping her search, but it is making things a lot funnier for her other friends.
My first and quite possibly only vore story. I wrote what I like, and it might not be what you like. Contains discussion of fatal digestion, discussion of scat, and casual disregard for human suffering.
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Posted by ecufan360 5 years ago Report
hope this isnt the last great story
Posted by Bright 5 years ago Report
Cruel irony is one of my favourite flavors in vore fiction.
Posted by threk 5 years ago Report
Awesome work, I love the drunk unaware pred trope, especially when it's same-size.
Posted by Entity 5 years ago Report
Lovely story i have to say ^^
Posted by pbysteria 5 years ago Report
Great story. Love the casual setting for it.
Posted by Kelly 5 years ago Report
Wow that was an amauing story iþ hit all the beats ! I hope for a follow up / another story in the same vaine at this one ! Keep up writing what you personally enjoy :3
Posted by Deska 5 years ago Report
Absolutely great read!
Posted by Winny 5 years ago Report
Lovely story~ Casual/Disregard of life/discussing scat. Merph~ Would love to see you continue writing. <3
Posted by dcvfgb1234 5 years ago Report
That's a really lovely story!
I really loved it. Wouldn't mind reading more of that type of content. XD
Especially the talks about her killer metabolism and what would happen to Lisa was super hot. Like really super hot. (powerful digestions and wicked metabolisms are my cryptonie XD )
I only have one regret about it: It ended too soon. XD It was one of those stories where i just wanted more and didn't want it to end. Which happens rarely, so kudos for managing to nail it so well!
Posted by soline 5 years ago Report
Well that was wickedly amazing! Welcome to the portal with a fantastic entry! Certainly hope it doesn't stay your only story :0.
Posted by dcvfgb1234 5 years ago Report
Have you ever considered making a sequel to this?
Just came past it again and still really love it.
Posted by Kelly 4 years ago Report
Thats still one of my favorite storys ! Ever thought about doing a sequel ?
Posted by ArtaxIsSleeping 4 years ago Report
I've certainly considered it, but I don't really have a good picture of where the story would go from here. I do have some other ideas I'd like to work on when my free time, motivation, and not-being-living-with-my-family-during-the-pandemic align again.
Posted by Kelly 4 years ago Report
I mean just a bit more of them "taunting her" and then just write out the digestion and disposal ? ^-^ I mean its implied but I allways love to see the writers interpretation of the event :P And Id be totally up for a new a story from you wish you luck that things get better soon !
Posted by HentaiMaster90000 1 year ago Report
Personally, a part of me feels bad for Lisa and wants her to survive, but another part of me wants Jen to wake up the next morning and slowly piece it together. Perhaps you could introduce a moral conflict of some kind. Perhaps the three girls could decide to get Lisa out, but can't because Jen fell asleep, or maybe Jen finds out, but she turns out to be a massive people pleaser and lets Lisa digest just for the approval of her friends.
Posted by KrasnyiKoiot 4 years ago Report
This was a fun read... I love settings of this variety, and the others' amusement just adds to that. Cheers for sharing it!
Posted by Whereaminow27 4 years ago Report
If lisa ever gets out, I know 3 girls who are going to be fed to a drunk girl :?
Posted by Kelly 6 months ago Report
Hey just wanted to jump in here and say its still one of my favorite stories ever. And I hope to maybe see more by you in the future ^-^
Posted by ArtaxIsSleeping 6 months ago Report
Noted, haha, and I do appreciate it! The creative brain worms come upon me without warning and I do not control them.
Posted by Kelly 5 months ago Report
I feel you. Just wanted to share some love with the writer of one of my favorite stories x3 The thrill in it is great of what might happen in the end with the casual calmness of the girls.