Posted by pendingdelete5vf735 5 years ago Report

I love this story! ^^ bondage and vore mixed together with strawberries whats not to love. Being prey my self i loved the full tour and digestion a lot. Great work ! <3

Posted by BunnyWrites 5 years ago Report

Thanks grenade, I'm thrilled to hear you liked it <3

This one was pretty focused on the pred's POV but I'm glad to hear it was still fun to read if you prefer being prey. I have a few other stories that touch more on the prey POV you might enjoy if you check the gallery~

Posted by pendingdelete5vf735 5 years ago Report

I well check then out ^^ thank you for the heads up and i know it was more Pred Pov i just always put my self in the preys point of view. Lol

Posted by surtech5 5 years ago Report

Fantastic story, glad to see it published!

Posted by BunnyWrites 5 years ago Report

Thanks! And thanks again for your suggested edits~

Posted by ShinjiIkari 5 years ago Report

What a great story, thank you for sharing! I love how Luna turned from, well, reluctant, to full on dominating him and even his girlfriend a little~
And I think her boyfriend might not be safe for long. Hmm... In a society like this, it should be easy to find a new one.

The laws which seemingly are becoming "fairer" with consent sheets, the work ethic and the male/female relationships in this universe are really well described, even though they were not the focus of the story at all. It makes for a world that I really would love to live in... for 6 to 8 hours... <3

And a great ending!

Posted by BunnyWrites 5 years ago Report

Thanks Shinji <3

I wanted to try and write a slightly less eager pred in comparison to my other stories, where the pred is gagging for it from the start. It makes for a fun arc seeing what makes them change their mind.

And yeah I love adding the little teases about other vore things going on in the world, it's pretty motivating for other stories~

Posted by Omnium51 5 years ago Report

Great story! I love how much Luna teased Sebastian before and during the swallowing scenes. Thank you for the shoutout as well! <3

Posted by BunnyWrites 5 years ago Report

Thanks, I always love pred-prey teasing <3 You deserve the shoutout, I adore your stories~

Posted by oishi1 5 years ago Report

I really enjoyed the story. It is very flattering to be marked as an inspiration.

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I liked how realizing he knew caused Luna to go all in.

The girlfriend reveal was funny


The ending line was perfect.

Posted by BunnyWrites 5 years ago Report

Yay I'm glad you liked it! I love including a reference to prey calorie counting in my stories, it adds a wonderful objectifying vibe to it.

Posted by Eclipseneko51 5 years ago Report

I really enjoyed that, I like how luna started off almost fully apposed to the idea of swallowing a person until abigail threatened to eat Sebastian for her and decided that eating him would be a good thing and changed her whole opinion on eating people specially at the end when she was having thoughts about how many calories her boyfriend would have.

Posted by BunnyWrites 5 years ago Report

Thanks Eclipseneko, glad to hear you enjoyed it <3

And yeah that change in attitude is one of my fav things to do in vore stories. It really sells the appeal of vore.

Posted by TheMouthsOfBabes 5 years ago Report

This one is probably my favorite of your stories, simply because it has what I'm picturing as a goth chick. Goths > All, imo. They also make for perfect predators. The addition of uncaring observers makes the whole experience that much hotter, too. Looking forward to the future, naughty, adventures of Luna!

Posted by BunnyWrites 5 years ago Report

Yeah I love the goth aesthetic. My wardrobe didn't contain a colour beyond black until I was into my 20s. It's a lot of fun, especially when used in a predatory context~

Posted by toin 4 years ago Report

I don't know how many of your stories I've binge-read tonight......
you are such a compelling writer!.... now if you'll excuse me, I really need to... relieve myself... of all this "narrative tension"....

Posted by BunnyWrites 4 years ago Report

Oh it's always so flattering to hear my writing clicks with someone. Hearing that folk "relieve themselves" to my stories is the main reason I write them <3

I'm not so fond of my earlier stories, they needed SO much more editing, I tried to pack in way too many different things in each paragraph. But I think I'm getting better, and I'm glad you're enjoying the stories, with hopefully more to come/cum~

Posted by toin 4 years ago Report

While I agree that your more recent stories are better-paced (therfore more believable), there's something charming about your early work... I feel it really tries to convey what you're all about, your vision.

I still haven't read every single story you posted, so rest assured there will definitely be more to relieve...
Also, you've inspired me to go back and edit my teenage stories, which have been buried for years (perhaps for good reasons, lol)... Kudos for that!

Posted by BunnyWrites 4 years ago Report

Ah yeah my early stories were generally written out of frustration that I couldn't find much content that combined sexual themes with vore. So those early stories were pretty packed with ideas that'd been circulating in my head for ages.

Also those early stories were written in a bit of a rush. I was writing a story every few days, whereas now it takes me months to get off my lazy ass.

And that's great you're going to go back to your old stories! Every bit of writing is a learning experience, and I bet with a touch of editing they'd be a lot of fun to read <3

Posted by toin 4 years ago Report

Yeah, that's why all of us start writing, isn't it? For me, it was the quest to make up for the lack of available content, to push my reveries into exciting, unxeplored territory and see what interesting ideas my mind would cook up (and believe me... it got weird and depraved), and my hope to entice others into the kind of twisted stuff that floats my boat (which is a really unusual twist on the whole gynophagia fantasy, you'll forgive me for being such a tease, lol)

I'll get to work on something this weekend and if I'll deem it any good at all, you guys'll get to read :)

Posted by BunnyWrites 4 years ago Report

I hope your writing goes well. Let me know if you put it up for folk to read as I'd love to check it out <3

Posted by toin 4 years ago Report

Oh, for sure. :) Tell you what, I'll PM you with some previews later this week!

In the meanwhile, I'll check out your other stories I haven't read yet! So far, my favorites are definitely your latest two works! I really admire your way with words, you're gifted, and I think I'm nowhere near as good. You come up with the perfect, evocative imagery, and put it in words like very few other fetish writers do.... and you go places that are so perverted and taboo, it's hard to resist ...the urge....

Posted by BunnyWrites 4 years ago Report

Ah sure my PMs are always open, so I'd love to check out a preview.

As for my phrasing, I try to take the time to find the right words, and then go through the painful process of cutting away the chaff to be as concise as possible while retaining all the pertinent details. Although sometimes I feel like my writing is just a collection of all the favourite phrases I've read in other stories over the years lol.

You'll probably notice the same sorts of phrasing and descriptions between stories though, it's tricky not being repetitive with this stuff, which is why I've tended to shy away from multiple prey in a single story.

Oh and please indulge in the urge <3 <3 <3

Posted by toin 4 years ago Report

I feel like you're literally describing every writer (no, artist) I know. Somebody once said that all great artists 'steal', and I actually agree... I'm not referring to plagiarism, but just stealing little phrasings, snipets, ideas, and at first just blatantly copying them the way they are... then, as you use them over and over again, and your experience and mastery over language increases, you subconsciously find ways of personalizing the input that helped you grow... (this is actually attested in socio-cultural learning theory, btw, lol).

So, yeah, I do that too, and lots... so, tbh, I don't think anyone can claim 100% ownership over their phrasings. But I fell in love with your writing style anyway, so I don't care how much of it comes from elsewhere :)

And yes, editing is always a painstakingly slow and analytical process, which is why most people hate it, lol... I know my work definitely needs it, especially since the particular story I'm going to revisit actually tries to tackle the multiple prey-repetition issue (I might take inspiration from your 'against the wall' story, I really like what you did with the missing girl posters!)

Though, perhaps my approach to writing differs slightly, as I always start with a sequence of pictures that I digitally edit (which function as plot points), and then narrate the story that links them together. So sometimes I need to adapt the story to the visual material I'm able to find online, which is enough to give you a headache, lol... I certainly remember getting stuck on certain bits for days.... but when you get a part right and it's good... you'll know from the 'urge' ;)

Posted by BunnyWrites 4 years ago Report

Oh yeah I love that quote, "poor artists copy, great artists steal." i.e. take something and then make it your own with your own style. I find reading a lot certainly helps my writing, it gives you a broader repository of past examples to draw upon.

I'm so flattered you enjoy my writing style, and I look forward to reading yours too, especially if you'll be taking parts of my own style to incorporate into yours, as that's what turns me on the most <3

As for the posters on the wall, you might like knowing that all those girls are IRL vore/dolcett fans who agreed to appear for it. I thought it added some wonderful context, alluding to so many enticing vore moments without overpowering the main narrative.

That's curious you start with a sequence of images. I tend to have a particular moment of the scene in mind, then plan backwards to how we got there. The problem I find is that as I plot out possible options, the options start multiplying and diverging and soon my one story has plot branches for a dozen stories, and I never end up finishing it. But it does make for good material for spin offs/sequels.

Posted by toin 4 years ago Report

wow, so much to say! Let's take this PM, shall we?

Posted by BunnyWrites 4 years ago Report

Sure!

Posted by nosuspicious 4 years ago Report

Continuing my little tour of all my old favorites from you...

I think this is the story that won me over to the camp that prefers my vore stories to have explicit sexual content. I love how Luna starts by seeing Sebastian as a prospective fling, but that attraction ends up just as easily motivating her to forget her morals and submit to her newfound urge to eat him up. All the giant tongue and little cock action that precedes that gets me hot and bothered just thinking about it.

If you wanna know what lines finished me off, the first time was the girlfriend’s “I’ve been fattening him up for weeks and now you just swoop in!?” and the second was Luna absentmindedly wondering how many calories her boyfriend might be. I think it has to do with how women really view men they claim to love in these stories? Idk, but it makes me craaaazy <3

Posted by BunnyWrites 4 years ago Report

I'm glad you're enjoying them <3

The calorie counting has been a fav thing of mine to do in a few stories, I only try to avoid it now because I don't want to repeat myself too much, but it's such a wonderful way to both devalue the prey and reinforce the idea of them as food.

I had plans for a sequel sketched out, where Luna is invited to the firm's Christmas party, where of course they devour all the tiny male interns. She invites her boyfriend, not realising what would be involved, and later stumbles upon her boss Abigail midway through swallowing her now-shrunken boyfriend. She's super pissed at Abigail as she frees her boyfriend, but then notices the lipstick around his cock, and that he'd been lured into this through a blowjob, so decides to swallow him herself.

Posted by nosuspicious 4 years ago Report

Ohhh wow, I really love that sequel idea! I adore when the fate of the prey is just deserts (...or desserts?), but in that story's case it would retain your signature humiliation and cruelty since it's a bit out of proportion to cheating. That doesn't mean we aren't rooting for it to happen, of course <3

I wouldn't blame you if you're a little tired of writing about party scenarios given what people have been asking you to write lately, but that sequel is definitely something I'd love to see happen someday.

Posted by BunnyWrites 4 years ago Report

Yeah I love some karmic justice involved, it makes a story feel emotionally satisfying and takes out any feelings of guilt over enjoying it. Of course innocent prey are a lot of fun to write too, it's just builds a different type of tone.

And yeah I might write that sequel someday, although with all the queued commissions, it doesn't seem likely for a looooooong time.