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Cody's Last Gasp By lookoutbellow2016 -- Report

Paradise isn't all it's cracked up to be. Or...perhaps it's simply a matter of perspective. If you're not careful, it can take your breath away, as Cody S. finds out.

RP log with the brilliant Saeshan.

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Decius2198

Posted by Decius2198 5 years ago Report

Loved it!

lookoutbellow2016

Posted by lookoutbellow2016 5 years ago Report

*Bows* Thank you! It was definitely a treat to write out!

55555

Posted by 55555 5 years ago Report

Damn this is beautiful, love the detailed descriptions of the crushing asphyxia!

lookoutbellow2016

Posted by lookoutbellow2016 5 years ago Report

Thank you! That’s definitely an aspect that I enjoy. An...intimate aspect of the process.

boomer91

Posted by boomer91 5 years ago Report

I cannot express to you how amazing this one was. The authenticity, the humiliation, the dawning realisation that he is prey.... fuck. truly special <3

lookoutbellow2016

Posted by lookoutbellow2016 5 years ago Report

Thank you! It's all about painting a picture with words... Saeshan is amazing to work with. Is there a particular detail or two that really clicked with you?

boomer91

Posted by boomer91 5 years ago Report

The hints of realism - how the snake strikes his face to hold him before coiling - added to the details in the snake's perspective and contempt for its meal... the way the meal finally realised with horror that that was his face... the description as he realised he was being eaten and sliding inexorably down...


nnnnfff. hot. hehe

lookoutbellow2016

Posted by lookoutbellow2016 5 years ago Report

Hehe... Well I'm glad you enjoyed it! ;-)

simalst

Posted by simalst 4 years ago Report

Love it, the best RP I've read so far in vore scenes.

lookoutbellow2016

Posted by lookoutbellow2016 4 years ago Report

I'm glad you enjoyed it! Anything in particular stuck out, things that might be enhanced when/if there is a next time?

simalst

Posted by simalst 4 years ago Report

I think, I might. Wanna send me a PM? I could tell you, what I liked on the RP you did the most.

VoraciousPreyator

Posted by VoraciousPreyator 3 years ago Report

This was amazingly done! Loved every moment of it!

AAAAA5

Posted by AAAAA5 3 years ago Report

This is the best RP log I have ever read. Everything about it is excellent and there is nothing I disliked about it.
I wish I could RP as well as you two did.
10/10

Cellismymaster

Posted by Cellismymaster 2 years ago Report

Wow this is amazing love how you describe Cody he kinda of remind Cody C or Cody S from teen wolf

It was great how the snake attacked felt very real

lookoutbellow2016

Posted by lookoutbellow2016 2 years ago Report

I'm glad you enjoyed it! And yessss...hes *exactly" like Cody S. from Teen Wolf. ;-)

Cellismymaster

Posted by Cellismymaster 2 years ago Report

Haha great stuff wish there was more like this out there

lookoutbellow2016

Posted by lookoutbellow2016 2 years ago Report

Same! I love imagining a hot guy in perilous, erotic horror like this. Lol...there's a few boys out there that I'd love to see meet a similar end. Snakes are such...intimate predators, how they wrap and squeeze their prey. It's not like it's bloody or "violent..." it's just a nice, tight hug.