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A Good Meal But a Better Friend By surtech5 -- Report

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An Alternate ending to the story "A Best Friend But a Better Meal" requested by user ImmortalPrey.

The alternate ending starts at the # symbol. for the original story, please see here:
https://aryion.com/g4/view/538296

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Mechdragon1k

Posted by Mechdragon1k 5 years ago Report

Your writing is good but a bit soul crushing, even the nicer ending.

surtech5

Posted by surtech5 5 years ago Report

Yeah soul crushing sounds about right. If you want some happier endings of mine I can recommend "Demon Pet", "Reverse Prey trap", and "Triple S"

TastesUndivided

Posted by TastesUndivided 5 years ago Report

Love the alternate ending. Definitely one of my top favorites on the site. Good endings are rarely THIS satisfying.

surtech5

Posted by surtech5 5 years ago Report

Glad you liked it! Can't let Aldo off so easily after all.

sadcat

Posted by sadcat 5 years ago Report

Love the descriptions you gave!

sadcat

Posted by sadcat 5 years ago Report

Man I want more stories of this universe. Specifically followin these 2 friends XD

surtech5

Posted by surtech5 5 years ago Report

Same! I wish the author would get off his ass and write more.

AnAccount

Posted by AnAccount 2 years ago Report

This one is better. Thank you for the story.