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The Epilouge
 
Ce'vince Hedin was tracked as far as we could go, back toward his stronghold in his old province. We surrounded his abode and massed through the remnants of what guard he still had. This didn't take long with our extensive size and power, and with Camyey the size she was, the defenses were minimal compared to us.
We didn't find him here though, he had been taken captive by the Saynajaus elite assassins they had sent for Jyiri. The Saynajaus were not willing to risk an open confrontation with us at the time considering what might we had gathered together. They were also not happy with Hedin's performance and how he fled without standing his ground. We had learned this from the concubine he had left behind in his old stronghold.
We set about moving about the place and taking a break from the warpath we were on. I stayed on the battlements and watched the distant horizons and Sky. No one bothered me much as I was up there other than the elder mentors and Jaze, Odaira, and Wovelmlos. Sko came to me several times and stood there with me, sympathetic.
 
I turned to Gesh at the end of it all and took him aside with Sko and started out by saying, "I stayed as you requested. Was this what you wanted?"
"You did this for me?" Gesh asked rubbing his arm with his left hand and smiling. He had just taken off his armor and we were inside of the secondary hall in General Hedin's stronghold palace. The room was long and a somewhat wide and had a fireplace to either side and two square tables at the large end with a large backed chair amonst the further end. We sat at the table away from that north side to the other side. The room was mostly all red plush, even having red draperies more for decoration as there was no windows. Then on the mantlepieces were swords and some trinkets of silver, stone, or other type of jewelry or artpiece. There were pictures of Hedin all around between the draperies. The doors that led out of the room were beside the fireplaces, south side of the room. The tables were chestnut stained oak. The plush red back chairs had studs along where the plush met the wood. There were hanging candlebras along the ceiling of the room with some of the candles still lit to give the room a brighter glow but without the fireplaces going it was a soft not so bright light.
"I did not," Sko said and looked toward the west side door as Odaira and Jaze came in with Wovelmlos. Eckstal followed them as did Blae. Odaira draped her paws over the chair and gave me a hug.
"I have so much writing to do," Eckstal said.
"Are you going to help write my part first?" I asked her.
"I wonder why you started this story with the end of everyone. Didn't you want to start this story with an end to everyone as you did with the beginning of it?" Eckstal asked.
"You don't understand, Eckstal. This is not the end. We will be going on, toward the higher places and onward throughout he universe," Sko said.
"I will be coming back here eventually, I plan on it. I will be talking to Blae whether awake or asleep," I said to her.
"Could I talk to you about that later?" Blae put in.
I nodded to him and turned toward Sko, "I guess we have to put it better in a way. Eckstal and Jaze probably know better than anything about how things work around being an Ultin or a single centered high being. How about we just explain it to everyone Sko?"
"I don't have any problem. All but a few of them don't understand this," Sko said.
 
The door opened and Camyey with Sidge came in in their hudra cow-dragon forms and Sidge said, "What is it? Everyone started to drop off and we found you here."
Michi, Juir, Xixzok, and Gibbons came in soon after them. They were mostly all seated and Eckstal said, "We could have done this in the main hall with more room."
"That's okay, this is more of a side away from the real purpose. Many of the people with purpose won't seek to come by here that are doing their regular day to day tasks. It is off to the side and out of the way of the main traffice areas with all that's going on," I said.
"I hope all of you are accounted for," Sko said to them.
I stood up and spoke, "I didn't really want to make such a big event out of my leaving and just leave a message with Blae that I was going to go. I guess I'll just do this the long way then and talk to you about a few important things before I go."
"What's wrong?" Blae asked.
"It isn't so much wrong as it is more of a parting sentiment," Sko returned.
I continued, "Blae is going to be sort of in charge of what I was as well as Primeon while I am not at full presence here. That aside, this and what was happened is not what it seems."
"Do you know about Metaphors?" Sko said.
"Something that means something else," Michi said promptly.
"Yes, although allegory might be the proper term. But, through allegory and possible metaphoric means, this is what it is. Although on the surface it is fantasy and by all means it is to those who read it, it is meant to be something far greater.
The average audience who reads this will take it with a grain of salt. They have every right. That is, until I present them with a point that it isn't all so much fantasy. This in itself is a set of ideas and beliefs that were put into this story. It is also a combination of what was and is a part of several years of fantasic planning. It was only put here and now, at such an unplanned timing to be what it is. It was brought together, not by particular coincidence but a unification of what was and what it is. All of the ideas and concepts are now unified into one whole piece. I am very suprised onto how it turned out. I am very satisfied on how it turned out.
I don't mean to force imply terms on any particular person. That what should really be gotten out of this is a few terms. I have said what it is to me in the story and what everything I believe it is with true life and the secondary life. What should be taken away is just determine and use your own power to pave your own way."
 
Exphysica En Stomatica
 
I had since turned back into a human. I made green, red, and blue lights hover on my hands and was juggling them around in front of Blae, Jaze, and Wovelmlos.
�Do we have to watch you do this? I�ve already used my powers, so why can�t I just do it myself?� Jaze said.
I threw the red ball of light toward and inside of Jaze�s mouth as she finished her last words. She placed a paw over her mouth and took two steps ahead and gave a heave but then swallowed.
�Ah! Exclelsia excor.� I said moving my hand in a circle quicker and quicker at Jaze. She gripped her stomach and I made a wider circle each time until each time I did it Jaze�s belly physically moved with it, a patrusion of a half ball moving along the outside from the inside.
�Ahhh�� Wovelmlos said as Blae laughed.
�Hee hee, oops,� I said throwing the blue ball right into Blae�s mouth as he laughed. He gasped putting his hands over his throat and made an audible swallow putting a hand on his belly and breathing heavily. Wovemlos watched this uneasily and with a wide smile.
�Meep,� I said taking both arms and hands up and to my sides and brought my arms, hands, and fingers back to together in front of me.
Blae and Jaze flew through the air, their bellies extending before them until they met belly to belly and collapsed slightly on the ground.
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Originally when I finished my Hail Primus novel. JessKatt from vor-com said that the last chapter felt rushed. So, I started on an epilouge after the regular novel was published. It remained unfinished as I took it many different ways after that. To date, I never made a full epilouge for Hail Primus since I replaced it with the Book of Particles that follows another more personal path with Ias. Hence the little tidbit near the end that seems out of place. Hail Primus remains one of the only full length novels I wrote to date about concepts and universe building I've done since the 4th grade. I've drawn a comic of the first chapter since but officially Hail Primus is retired for another path but does still include the first chapter as I originally wrote it.

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