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A visit to the local spa, takes a unexpected twist.
Here's my second vore story, hope you like it, please leave me comments below.
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Posted by soline 5 years ago Report
Fantastic job!
It's ever so faintly reminiscent of Marloweny's stuff and I love how the prey's mindset (and Jenny's decisions from here!) are left up to the viewer!
Certainly hoping for a part two, though of course I'm biased towards her simply nervously fleeing the Spa with her new 'friend's'.
Posted by Hawkeye7 5 years ago Report
Thanks for the kind words @soline - I'll certainly now check out Marloweny's stuff.
With regards to Part II - its funny you should say about fleeing the Spa..... ;)
Its already in the works
Posted by soline 5 years ago Report
Ooooh, well now I wait with baited breathe!
Posted by pendingdelet205h2n9 5 years ago Report
Very nice!
It's rare to see a pred actually react rationally to the situation... I look forward to seeing where this goes next!
Posted by 3l33thax0r 5 years ago Report
You’re 2 for 2 so far with your stories, amazing work!
I wonder if Gary and Linda make it out...
Posted by Hawkeye7 5 years ago Report
Thank you so much for the kind comments and support. It really means so much to a beginning writer! As to part 2, it’s already in the works. So not too long to wait! :)
Posted by Matteo42 3 years ago Report
Hahaha I love how awkward it is for them,and how you perfectly show it. Great job, for a second story!
Posted by Hawkeye7 3 years ago Report
Thank you! Really happy you liked it!