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Here's a quick fall-themed story from me, based on some rather... interesting dialogue between Reimu and Minoriko right before her battle on Mountain of Faith's first stage. Shizuha gets to join in on the fun too, and then some lewd stuff happens with the Aki sisters.
Big thanks to Draconatedz for helping me with this!
I may not have made this clear yet, what with her constantly getting gobbled up in Boss Rush, but I actually really REALLY like Reimu as a pred. Mostly because I feel like she could make up an excuse to gobble up anyone in Gensokyo that got on her nerves, even her 'friends'. I also just really like writing her as a big meanie who bullies her food a lot.
Just as a warning to those of you who don't like it, there's a short disposal scene at the end. I've marked off the start and end of it so you can skip over it if you wish. As for those of you who do like that sort of thing... enjoy, I guess? It's my first try with this kind of stuff, so it might be a little rough. Don't expect it to be a recurring thing of mine, I just wanted to try it.
I tried to keep this under 5000 words as a sort of challenge to myself to keep things relatively short and sweet, and to get my brain working again with this whole writing thing. It was quite a treat to write, and once I got going it was pretty easy to keep writing. Might be a recurring 'series' of mine.
As a side note, Yuyuko's Boss Rush entry is nearing completion, so you can expect it in about a week or two depending on how kind classes are to me in the future. This is just to tide things over until that story drops. As always, hope you enjoy!
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Posted by Aqualite 4 years ago Report
Reimu's a fantastic pred who really needed a win. Thank you for giving her one.
Posted by DimentedChaos 4 years ago Report
My only regret is not being able to write a story for her sooner. I just didn't have the inspiration to write a story with Reimu getting a win until just recently... but don't worry, I plan on giving her more spotlight in the future.
Posted by Aqualite 4 years ago Report
No worries. It lead to a fantastic little story. ^^
Posted by DimentedChaos 4 years ago Report
Thanks! Disposal's not really my bread and butter per se, but I'll admit I'm not opposed to writing it every once in a while, I just prefer to leave it implied most of the time. Though, I'll probably just reserve it for certain stories where I feel it's an appropriate way to cap off a story. Glad you liked it, though.
Posted by colemercer 4 years ago Report
ah, reimu a underated pred, i really like reimu for pred (still remi is my number 1) and eating a gods and become more a more sexy and powerful is a brutal concept if you wnat make a serie of reimu vs MoF i really like it and you can make a series for your favorite preds vs x touhou game, like sample "byakuren vs touhou 13" think about it
Posted by Ananta 4 years ago Report
the way you describe Reimu being nonchalant about the aki sisters digesting in her gut was a nice touch, showing just how much they really mattered to her.
now Yuyuko, can we expect some soul vore or sentient fat? not requesting, of course, but given she can manipulate the dead, not out of the question.
Posted by DimentedChaos 4 years ago Report
All I'll say is: wait and see. I don't want to throw all my cards out on the table and ruin the surprise. You'll find out when the story drops.
Posted by Ananta 4 years ago Report
then I shall wait patiently, as Yuyuko is likely one of the more anticipated preds. I have confidence you'll do her right.
Posted by nyttyn 4 years ago Report
This was a cute story! Looking forward to YYK, she's one of my favorites.
Posted by DimentedChaos 4 years ago Report
Glad you liked it! And hopefully I can deliver with the Yuyuko story, it seems like she's a big favorite from what I gather. I'll definitely try to give it my best effort.
Posted by SpadeOfTheRedScarves 4 years ago Report
Wow, MoF has been out since 2007, and only now someone makes a story about this piece of dialogue between Reimu and Minoriko? Eh, better late than never I always say, though I am surprised people haven't wrote/drawn something related to their interaction before.
Anyway, this was great read. thanks for giving Reimu some time in the spotlight, she really deserves it.
Posted by DimentedChaos 4 years ago Report
I was pretty surprised myself when I found that no one made anything related to their interaction. Guess that's why I felt compelled to write a story based on it... Anyway, I'm glad you enjoyed it!
Posted by zenox81 4 years ago Report
Amazing story, I loved the detailed digestion procces, Combined with the nonchalantnes of it all.
Posted by ItsSongxing 4 years ago Report
Alright! Finally got around to reading this one, and once again, you've delivered one hell of a treat! With how many stories out there see Marisa and Reimu getting themselves eaten, it's nice to see the protagonists get some wins, too; especially Reimu.
The Aki sisters aren't a pair of Touhous that particularly stick in my mind, but I like what you did with them! The little bit of incest at the end, and how their last moments are spent in orgasm before that shrine maiden gut makes that final churn to melt them into soup...Mmm! That's the good stuff. At this rate, you're actually gonna get me to write more Touhou stuff 'cause I'm just so impressed by how good you're doing with them!
Posted by DimentedChaos 4 years ago Report
I've bullied Reimu enough for the time being, so I figured I'd write a little something for her to make up for it... I should probably do one for Marisa too at some point, but at the moment I'm swamped with deadlines for assignments and tests to study for, so my time is limited and my creativity is dry... Someday, though.
And yes, you definitely should write some touhou stuff again! I can tell you've still got it after the Kurumi vignette.
Posted by ItsSongxing 4 years ago Report
I know that feel about being swamped, my dude. Don't feel like you have to rush - you've provided a lot of good Touhou content to sate a lot of cravings, both for art and words!
Might do some stuff with other PC-98s. I feel like nothing else I could write of Kurumi could truly match the quality I reached in "Forgotten Vampire Gets Fat", but maybe something with some other PC-98 could match it.
Posted by DimentedChaos 4 years ago Report
Personally, I'd absolutely love to see a story involving Yumemi where she gobbles up someone, or perhaps even multiple someones. For science, obviously.
Posted by ItsSongxing 4 years ago Report
Yumemi and Rikako share in gurgling down magic users for the sake of science!
Posted by colemercer 4 years ago Report
im agree with this idea specially yumemi like pred