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Alex has been waiting for a special occasion to roast Luna for the first time, and when his Mother comes by for her birthday he has the perfect reason.

The finale of "An Unconventional Relationship" but not the last story I'll write with these characters. I was able to get a real burst of writing done in the last few days due to how my schedule worked out, expect something more along the lines of once, maybe twice per week going forward, split between the two universes I have depending on my mood.

Let me know what you think in the comments, even if you didn't like it, remember that if I never get any feedback I'll never get any better.

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clancy688

Posted by clancy688 5 years ago Report

This was great! Looking forward to more! :)

I have to say, those quips about the graduation party and seventh anniversary sounded interesting. Hoping these might come up as side stories eventually? ^^

How did he he get himself cooked for the anniversary? ^^

TastyBisexual

Posted by TastyBisexual 5 years ago Report

Thanks!

I try to put in little details like that in my stories to make the world seem more alive, and they are definitely candidates for side stories in the future.

For the anniversary dinner, he got a couple of his siblings to cook him up in the oven while the parents were out of the house. If I write that story, it will include m/m content since, well, look at my username. I'm a guy, I'm bi, and even though most of the time I fantasize about being the chef I am definitely willing to write a guy getting cooked up and enjoying it.

clancy688

Posted by clancy688 5 years ago Report

Hehe, yeah, that's fun too. :)

I just imagine his surprise at the grad party seeing his mothers squirming on the spit... ^^

Maybe some sort of double spitting? Both on the same, with their head towards each other so that they are kissing? Or one behind the other, so that the one behind can stimulate the pussy's in front with her lips. :)

TastyBisexual

Posted by TastyBisexual 5 years ago Report

Definitely heads together kissing, the two of them are definitely the sort of romantics to want to be roasted like that.

Brawn

Posted by Brawn 5 years ago Report

Hehe amazing story again. Really like that she helps prep her own roasting. Getting supplies and such.

The chain roasting was fun. Never heard of it before.

And ofcource the trophies. Head is great but the rump pillows are a nice touch.

As some honest feedback. While you obviously are a great writer some of the scenes lack a bit of detail. That could be intentional but just wanted to point it out.

Looking forward to more.

TastyBisexual

Posted by TastyBisexual 5 years ago Report

Thanks, the best part of willing prey is helping with all the tedious work them comes from cooking someone.

Chain roasting is a pretty rare style of cooking, I saw it in a story I haven't found since and it stuck with me.

Yeah, I was thinking of what to do with the parts that wouldn't make a coat and that just came to me.

And yeah, I've noticed the detail issue myself, but I find it difficult to add in detail without breaking up the flow of the story. I'll keep working on it.

clancy688

Posted by clancy688 5 years ago Report

I remember a very good image sequence of a girl being chain spitted, will look it up once I'min private <heh>

The trophy is very cool. I imagine Luna having sex and looking at her own stuffed head there... ^^

TastyBisexual

Posted by TastyBisexual 5 years ago Report

If you find that image set, please send me a link.

And yeah, that's why the trophy went there.

clancy688

Posted by clancy688 5 years ago Report

I have it saved. Am just in a Shinkansen right now (and the next five hours), so looking for it might be... awkward, lol.

TastyBisexual

Posted by TastyBisexual 5 years ago Report

Wow, that is definitely a very different way of doing it than what I wrote. Too bad it didn't include any cooking.

Azane

Posted by Azane 5 years ago Report

Popping in to say thank you for these :o more inventive than I’d anticipated!