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Boss Rush - Ghostly Banquet By DimentedChaos -- Report

Kept you waiting, huh?

This ended up taking a lot longer than I was hoping it would. Check the blog I'll be posting soon for more details on that.

Anyway... you can consider this my Halloween special. A ghost story, if you will. Because... it's Yuyuko. Ghosts. And stuff. Yeah.

These kinds of stories just write themselves, really. Yuyuko's canonically portrayed has being a big eater, so what better than to give her a big ol' belly after snacking on some hapless heroines? Anyway, PCB is another one of my favorites, it has a simple yet fun mechanic and gameplay, and it's got both Yuyuko AND Yukari. As you can tell from my gushing, Yuyuko's another one of my favorite Touhou girls. Hmm... I'm sensing a reccurring theme here with these Boss Rush entries so far...

...To be honest, though, I'm on the fence with this now that it's finished. Maybe just because I couldn't get the full idea that I had for this story translated into writing well enough, not to mention it's just a really longass piece. I didn't want to just scrap it and start over though, because I never like throwing away work I've spent time on unless it's absolutely unsalvageable.

Regardless of any prior rambling, I hope you still enjoy it. This one's a real beast in terms of length too, probably one of the longest things I'll ever write, so hopefully it doesn't get too boring at points. I mean, it's over 11k words, man! You'd have to be crazy to read this all the way through in one sitting.

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HarlequinGemini

Posted by HarlequinGemini 5 years ago Report

Why is there not more Yuyuko content on this website

DimentedChaos

Posted by DimentedChaos 5 years ago Report

Top 10 questions science cannot answer

pbysteria

Posted by pbysteria 5 years ago Report

Comfy story! Had a really friendly mood overall and Yuyako makes for an adorable glutton.

DimentedChaos

Posted by DimentedChaos 5 years ago Report

Glad you liked it! I figured a more amiable story would be fitting for Yuyuko. She's fun to write, too.

Ananta

Posted by Ananta 5 years ago Report

oh, sentient fat, that's a good one. and, as one who likes non-fatal, revival is my second favorite as you get the perks of both! this is better than I imagined.

also the way that Yuyuko just casually talks to the heroes in her gut is a nice touch, very much different from the domineering Remilia and the power-hungry Okuu, and does sound very Yuyuko.

DimentedChaos

Posted by DimentedChaos 5 years ago Report

Thanks! I figured I'd get away from having super dominant preds for a little bit. Reformation isn't something I lean towards very often, but it fit for Yuyuko, since she's one of the friendlier final bosses. At least, that's how I initially thought about it when I was planning out the story.

Ananta

Posted by Ananta 5 years ago Report

hmm, can't wait to see what you do with Byakuren, objectively the friendliest of final bosses. and not a bad way to think about Yuyuko initially, she doesn't have many detractors.

colemercer

Posted by colemercer 5 years ago Report

AMAZING MISSION COMPLETED, ok sorry i need to do that joke, amazing story really more and more better hehe so, what next? touhou 19, 12,13 15 or 17?

DimentedChaos

Posted by DimentedChaos 5 years ago Report

I assume you meant 10 and not 19, since 19 definitely doesn't exist yet. Either way, I'm probably not going to do another Boss Rush entry for a while, since I don't really have any ideas for any of them at the moment. Sorry about that.

colemercer

Posted by colemercer 5 years ago Report

yeah my error, yes i mena th10 and ok everyone want a rest for something, so you gonna make another thing?

DimentedChaos

Posted by DimentedChaos 5 years ago Report

Nothing for the moment, though I might find some more lineart to color when I feel like it. If you haven't read my blog lately, go on and check it out.

colemercer

Posted by colemercer 5 years ago Report

ok i undertand, nice job anyways dimented

ItsSongxing

Posted by ItsSongxing 5 years ago Report

Once again, you knock it out of the park! I really like just how gluttonous Yuyuko was, eating almost a whole banquet after gobbling up the three heroes~ And that post-digestion weight gain was divine! PCB is one of those games where the final boss has the show stolen from her, so it's nice to see Yuyuko get the love over Yukari for once.

But I especially loved how you portrayed Yuyuko. Mischievous and a bit of a schemer, but still friendly and a bit airheaded when you get down to it. Gonna say though, I was absolutely not expecting that twist at the end.~

DimentedChaos

Posted by DimentedChaos 5 years ago Report

Thanks again! Writing Yuyuko as a big fatty who's constantly pigging out is honestly a blast. Plus she's just a fun character to write for in general... And the twist at the end was just for that extra silliness on top of everything else, since this was a fun little story.

It's a shame that Yukari hogged the spotlight in PCB, but it's not too big a deal for me, since I like 'em both to bits. Reminds me though, I gotta write something for Yukari someday... local thicc gap youkai gets even thicc-er.

ItsSongxing

Posted by ItsSongxing 5 years ago Report

Yukari could always use some literature lovin'. She makes a lovely prey with how haughty and powerful she is, but she also has some powerful ojou pred energies. Plus, she can just gap anyone she wants into her gut, simple as that.

Besides. If you don't think her PCB dress was practically made to highlight a chubby belly, you're wrong.

DimentedChaos

Posted by DimentedChaos 5 years ago Report

Facts

IkarusLobolos

Posted by IkarusLobolos 5 years ago Report

If you ever get the chance to do a Yukari pred I would love to see you go into detail about Yuyuko and Yukari's "sexy time" (If Yuyuko will even be in Yukari's Story) It was implied in this piece that Yukari took Yuyuko's bloated form out for a "test drive" but you never really went into detail over it. I assume that you opted to skip it over because it would make an already long read even longer so I guess that makes sense.

All I'm saying is that if we're going to make the thicc gap youkai get even thicc-er she should get the chance to take that bod out for a test drive, preferably with someone who shares her sentiment with gluttony.

Blackheartedreaper2

Posted by Blackheartedreaper2 5 years ago Report

This is so adorably spooky, perfect halloween story.

algog8

Posted by algog8 5 years ago Report

Let's stuff the rest of gensokyo in there

MysteriousGuy

Posted by MysteriousGuy 5 years ago Report

That was one wild but superb story. I have not gotten into reading such vore stories for a long time.

I especially love it when the vore isn't fatal, and the squeezing on them are just too good.

Aqualite

Posted by Aqualite 5 years ago Report

Quite the unexpected conclusion, and honestly a refreshing change in pace. I'm quite pleased with this one. Nice work.

DimentedChaos

Posted by DimentedChaos 5 years ago Report

Figured I'd change it up for once to keep things from getting stale. Glad to hear you liked it!

Circle0Trick

Posted by Circle0Trick 5 years ago Report

Eleven thousand words?
You spoil us.

Thank you for posting (I haven't actually read yet, though. I'll let you know what I think.)

yaboyguzma1

Posted by yaboyguzma1 5 years ago Report

Any plans to continue this?

DimentedChaos

Posted by DimentedChaos 5 years ago Report

All of the Boss Rush stories are intended to be one-shots, so I never really had the idea for a sequel ever planned. Sorry 'bout that.

rotta287

Posted by rotta287 3 months ago Report

Can't believe I just favorited this without comment all those years ago, because this is PEAK!