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Finished Alt-Ending to the one in my W.I.P Folder.
Cover Art Credit goes to Original Artist
I really wanted to make someone Matt could just take his frustrations from the other day, out on, since he's probably been holding it in since Mrs. Steel first refused to rebirth the girls.
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Posted by Whereaminow27 5 years ago Report
I did enjoy the alternate ending. He probably will end up with the teacher.
Posted by Robotdocter 5 years ago Report
i like the alt slightly better than the original, still like the original, its just the kidnapping that gets to me. wonder if you'll be doing alts for any of the rest of it if there is more. :o
Posted by WillingWombPrey 5 years ago Report
If you go to Greyj's commission status and scroll down to the very bottom you'll find he's in the progress of writing a third chapter to, Science of Unbirth.
Posted by WillingWombPrey 5 years ago Report
https://pregchan.com/d/src/1539037485997.jpg
Posted by C107galaxytachyon 5 years ago Report
There any particular reason you didn’t bother going more in-depth with the sisters’ rebirthing procedure? Cause I doubt it’d really be all that simple to induce just like “that”.
Posted by WillingWombPrey 5 years ago Report
I'm saving it for a second chapter I'll be making.
Posted by threk 5 years ago Report
Nice. Don't get me wrong, I love the original story with the prey being tricked into being trapped and the only person outside who knows being powerless to help them, but it's super weird to me that in the second one everyone just sort of rolls over and goes "K, gues I'm down two kids now" etc.
It's a really commonly reoccurring theme in max123's commissions too, so no judgement, I guess that's just his thing.
Posted by Lewdghost 5 years ago Report
Gotta admit, much prefer this one to the original. The actual unbirth was good, but yeah chapter 2 had issues in how it was done and the kidnapping itself, which this thankfully fixes.
Posted by WillingWombPrey 5 years ago Report
I'm glad you like it. Kidnapping gets under my skin, so I just do simple rewrites, or alt-endings, which actually keeps me calm.
Posted by Moonsniper 5 years ago Report
Are you going to do an alternative ending where he says yes
Posted by Apostolos 4 years ago Report
Well looks like the original one’s have been set to private