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When a party of adventurers celebrate a little too hard, mistakes are made.
This is my first vore piece and first time writing in a few years, I'd love any comments and feedback you can provide!
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Posted by TheMysteriousSadSack 5 years ago Report
Poor Vera, you will be missed
Posted by Ohgra 5 years ago Report
Stay tuned the the sequel I might write *wink wink*
Posted by Mechdragon1k 5 years ago Report
Does she get a resurrect?
Posted by Ohgra 5 years ago Report
Time will tell
Posted by Whereaminow27 5 years ago Report
Poor Vera, but Hopefully Lily will be forced to swallow some town girl.
Posted by Ohgra 5 years ago Report
I have plans for Lily and Vera, we shall see how things play out...
Posted by ntgtoowc 5 years ago Report
Oooh, very lovely. I'd love to see more of an unaware-ish pred like Bull. Maybe that enormous half-orc ass tempts inside some randy boy, who finds himself tucked in way too deep inside her slimy guts~?
Posted by threk 5 years ago Report
Excellent first piece!
Posted by Ohgra 5 years ago Report
Thank you!
Posted by bizyVore 5 years ago Report
amazing! Love that accidental stuff and the complete disconnect between Vera's experience and what these two drunks imagine it's like is a great plot device.
Posted by Ohgra 5 years ago Report
Thanks, glad you enjoyed!
Posted by Valorie 4 years ago Report
Great stuff, I loved it!
Posted by Ohgra 4 years ago Report
Thank you!
Posted by ntgtoowc 4 years ago Report
Still planning out that sequel?
Posted by Ohgra 4 years ago Report
Yeah, it's half-done but I've been hit with writers block real bad lately. I'm juggling this and two other unfinished stories I just can't seem to get where I want them.
Posted by ntgtoowc 4 years ago Report
Totally understandable. I wish you luck coming out of it, your writing is incredible and I just can't stop reading the stuff you make.
Posted by Ohgra 4 years ago Report
Hey thanks, I appreciate it!
Posted by tgawsome 4 years ago Report
Oh wow! This was a nice treat to read. I've always loved mixing DnD settings and characters with vore and you've done an amazing job of it.
Posted by Ohgra 4 years ago Report
Hey thanks! Yeah this series is basically me taking my homebrew D&D setting and making it horny!