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Heather Abernathy comes home early to find her daughter mid-coitus with a handsome Pred. You can imagine what happens next...or can you?
I've had this story kicking around in my head for years, but was never happy with any version that I put down on paper until now. I've got a few sequel ideas; perhaps I'll try to flesh them out as well.
Tell me what you think!
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Posted by LordDantai 5 years ago Report
Fantastic story.
Posted by Red_Wolfen 5 years ago Report
Thank you!
Posted by ToweringValkyrie 5 years ago Report
Really enjoyable. The outcome was unexpected and fun to experience
Posted by Red_Wolfen 5 years ago Report
Thank you!
Posted by TheDarkTraveler 5 years ago Report
I would have prefered the reencarnaton path but still a great story
Posted by Red_Wolfen 5 years ago Report
Thank you! I like resurrection stories sometimes, but this one really relied on permanent digestion. Perhaps in a sequel.
Posted by TheDarkTraveler 5 years ago Report
it just felt stange that he would egnore his bff's least wish to be turned into her yonger sister (sort of)
Posted by Bod67 5 years ago Report
Looking forward to the sequel
Posted by Red_Wolfen 5 years ago Report
Thank you! Hopefully it won't take me too long.
Posted by heromc 5 years ago Report
Fuck, this was really good!! I really enjoyed it!
Posted by Red_Wolfen 5 years ago Report
Thank you!
Posted by BardicLasher 5 years ago Report
Good stuff!
Posted by Red_Wolfen 5 years ago Report
Thank you!
Posted by BardicLasher 5 years ago Report
Good stuff!