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A teenage Pred crashes his older sister's pool party. One by one, the guests go down his cock, but will he really digest his own sister? (Hint: of course he will).
This was an idle fantasy that I just wanted to put down on paper because I haven't written anything in a while. It kind of got out of hand in terms of length, but I like the result. Of course, I ended up with two versions, because I couldn't decide how it should end.
All characters are over 18.
Tell me what you think!
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Posted by Borgle 3 years ago Report
I love this version so much, keep up the gud work!
Posted by Red_Wolfen 3 years ago Report
Thank you!
Posted by Ome 3 years ago Report
Now this was HOT
Plus always love karmic vore justice
Posted by Red_Wolfen 3 years ago Report
Thanks! I really wanted to play around with what made each of the characters feel justified or cheated by the events of the story.
Posted by Maxchatt200 3 years ago Report
why is this a bad ending
Posted by Red_Wolfen 3 years ago Report
Just the vernacular of "bad end", in the sense that the sister didn't escape her fate at the last minute in this version.
Posted by Maxchatt200 3 years ago Report
oh ok
Posted by Houyo 3 years ago Report
That was pretty awesome, loved the perspective of each girl.
Posted by Red_Wolfen 3 years ago Report
Thank you! I had a lot of fun exploring each girl, her relationship to Aiden, and her reaction to being consumed.
Posted by theshadowstar58 3 years ago Report
Oh wow that was an incredible story! Love the detail! Love a proud pred! Love incestuous vore, it's so beautiful and taboo.