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Lost in Dark World By ErinTheVee -- Report

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A Deltarune story, part of a trade with HaplessCyndaquil. Lewdest thing I've written for the site for certain. Featuring a handful of characters I tried doing a thing to format it better for an easier read. It could be worse, or better. I finished well into 2AM, so the ending might feel slightly rushed?

Anyways, this might have a continuation from myself or Hapless. Enjoy!

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HaplessCyndaquil

Posted by HaplessCyndaquil 5 years ago Report

Loved it! Ralsei is such a good boy, and I love the bit about Noelle getting so calm she just kinda accepted her fate :p

doomed

Posted by doomed 5 years ago Report

Is this fatal, like they are digested and never coming back

ErinTheVee

Posted by ErinTheVee 5 years ago Report

I wasn't sure, since I thought I'd leave it open ended for continuation. It's either fatal, or the two prey will wake up in a classroom. I'll add an Implied Fatal tag, since it's not revealed either way yet but I did lean towards Fatal while writing it.

HaplessCyndaquil

Posted by HaplessCyndaquil 5 years ago Report

Not to cut off Erin here, but I'll very likely be doing a chapter or 2 of continuation and I am of the mood that they should remain as chub on our intrepid heroes.

doomed

Posted by doomed 5 years ago Report

Oh , that sounds nice , but I was hoping they would respawn and then be upset they were eaten , the story is phenomenal either way