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If I'm being honest coming up with the terrible tittle took me longer than it did to write the story. Oh also hi again I guess.
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Posted by TheMysteriousSadSack 5 years ago Report
what a grizzly end for the group of friends, pretty good though
Posted by babyhater 5 years ago Report
Eh I'll probably write more.
Posted by TrainerKatrine 5 years ago Report
Huh.
Was about to send this story to you, lel.
This is my plan to slowly establish a zone for you, learning your patterns, until I eventually make you mine from the other side of the world.
I mean what
Ollooo o/
Posted by Becquerl 5 years ago Report
The power of friendship prevailed!
Posted by VoraciousSincerity 5 years ago Report
This is hilarious!...though you seem to have knack for making vore that is both to my fatal-digestion-scat-weight gain-tastes and is very funny, so there's that.
Posted by babyhater 5 years ago Report
Lol this is best and longest winded description I have ever seen.
Posted by VoraciousSincerity 5 years ago Report
I hoped you or somebody would find that amusing...
Posted by soline 5 years ago Report
It's always the little things that get me. Jen's immediate horror and phone call after she's plunged head-first into whatever's left and the connect that they can't hear anything through her belly. Which means Hazel was probably screaming for help and no one even noticed....
Lovely story, an instant-fave here!
Posted by babyhater 5 years ago Report
Oh, I'm glad someone noticed that. Thanks for the fave. Also many screams went unheard that night.
Posted by soline 5 years ago Report
It was very wonderful. I did like how the girls just seemed to 'vanish'. Riley's final scream is just...gone, not a single peep from her once she's visibly vanished.
That and the semi-realistic fact that Hazel didn't just shrink into nothing. No one noticed her digesting because all that mass is just...still there, filling out Eddy's gut