Delightful! Tad florid, but I do love a good florid style now and then. My brain did strip a gear at "Steel like a shard of pain fractured from an obsidian Golgotha scythed through dark, warm, yielding flesh." Like. That's a sentence that takes a moment to unpack, and it's gorgeous.
Posted by immortalsane 5 years ago Report
Delightful! Tad florid, but I do love a good florid style now and then. My brain did strip a gear at "Steel like a shard of pain fractured from an obsidian Golgotha scythed through dark, warm, yielding flesh." Like. That's a sentence that takes a moment to unpack, and it's gorgeous.
Posted by EvilFuzzy9 5 years ago Report
Hehe, yeah. I like when I can get more flowery with the prose~
Posted by emilbootanimefreak 5 years ago Report
Have you ever thought of making a story with Kushina taking part in some "fun" with Naruto and his family?