Posted by blessedwasthechild 5 years ago Report

Public vorgies are the best. Anyone who knows me knows I'm a ravenous sucker for vore at parks, so I took to this like butter on toast.

MURR! Doe's make such good UB preds like, omg >.>

The two parents reveling in the tension and teasing of an uncertain future was a wonderful detail, I like it when onlookers know what they want to see, but not knowing if it is going to actually happen somehow makes the anticipation so much better, and seeing that curiosity and expectancy mirrored in the parents was wonderful.

Not knowing if someone you like is gonna actually wind up nommed while reading a story or a comic is such a great feeling... seeing two predators feel the same way... yes, just yes. That's the kind of connection that bonds us pervs to the work itself--its relatable.

I'll confess I wanted to be the foxie in this~ hehehe.

Lastly I think the neatest detail was the focus on the dress-code at the start. A bit telly instead of showy, and I say that cuz I had to completely rewrite 3 pages last night cuz I realized I told instead of showed that entire time so its on my mind, but it was still great, and I think it is the novel thing that would make this stick out from other vorgy stuff, asides from the obvious fact that vorgies involving cubs doesn't get a whole lot done around here, not to my knowledge. But anyway, the slight infusion of BDSM, ownership, and objectification that the dress-code brings really helped to set the stage for how banal these children would treat their predicaments, and how enthusiastic the adults are to subject their children to this.

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Posted by Slimshod 5 years ago Report

I really enjoy park settings too but I think you've rubbed off on me a bit more and heightened the need for more park activities~

Thank you for your kind words, I'm really glad you enjoyed it! The bit with the parents was a sort of second thought that I toyed with and hadn't really expected to play into much. Really happy with how it turned out then.

The foxie may/may not have have been inspired by you ;D

Yes, you're right, that part was a bit shoehorned in as I started the story. I wasn't entirely sure how I wanted to approach things but quickly figured it out as I went on. If I were one for putting out final drafts, I'd definitely go back and change how that section of the story plays out.

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Posted by blessedwasthechild 5 years ago Report

that's the nice thing about rough drafts. As Niel Gaiman says, writing is about making people think you knew what you were doing all along.

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Posted by Slimshod 5 years ago Report

Ain't that the truth!

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Posted by roostuf 5 years ago Report

FUCK! God damn dude, one of the best vore cub stories i've read <3

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Posted by Slimshod 5 years ago Report

Awesome to hear! Thank you dude :D

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Posted by Biggulp 5 years ago Report

Fuck I can't get my pants off fast enough, this has gotten me hard as hell good work.

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Posted by Slimshod 5 years ago Report

Another happy visitor~

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Posted by grz01 5 years ago Report

Pease don't write stories this hot in future, I had try and hide a stiffy after getting off the bus after reading it! :-)

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Posted by Slimshod 5 years ago Report

Disclaimer: read at your own peril :P

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Posted by LavenderLapine 5 years ago Report

This was incredibly hot.
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Kinda makes me want to write cub stuff

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Posted by Slimshod 5 years ago Report

If you can, do it

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Posted by LavenderLapine 5 years ago Report

If I get a good enough idea, I will.

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Posted by Slimshod 5 years ago Report

Cool.

I have the opposite problem: too many good ideas, not enough motivation energy.

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Posted by LavenderLapine 5 years ago Report

If you ever have a story idea you don’t feel like writing, I could take a crack at it for you.

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Posted by Lewdtonium 3 years ago Report

fuuuuuck dude, I don't know man.. Somehow I just can't finish these stories. Every couple months I'll fap to a written story and everytime it's yours. Regardless of how many times I've already came that day, I still bust the fattest fucking nut halfway through the story. Insane job my dude.

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Posted by Slimshod 3 years ago Report

Maybe one day you'll make it all tge way through :P Thank you very much though! I'm glad you enjoy these enough to come back for more~

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Posted by ItsjustmeEP 1 year ago Report

Aughh...I love your work but damn does that post nut clairity hit like a train
Then I remember thiscis all F A N T A S Y and I'm good.

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Posted by Slimshod 1 year ago Report

Yup, keep that in mind. They don't exist and no one is getting hurt. Enjoy, guilt free.

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Posted by ItsjustmeEP 1 year ago Report

Something many people struggle to wrap their heads around...
This is a work of FICTION.
In a way, Correlation doesn't lead to causation.

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Posted by Slimshod 1 year ago Report

Absolutely. It's a frustrating situation when people willfully bury their heads in the sand.

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Posted by chibidiely777 1 year ago Report

I try to look for this again but for some reason some of the things in tags dont show up at all so it took me a while to actually find your stuff and this one i had to look into history for it so why am i the only one who cant see everything shown in "underage prey" ?

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Posted by Slimshod 1 year ago Report

You're not the only one. Eka's actively hinders the search for content with underage characters. Anything with related tags is blocked so it can't be found.

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Posted by Slimshod 1 year ago Report

Alternatively, you can bookmark my Ao3 and watch for new updates there. I'm going to start uploading all written content involving underage chars there just b/c of the issue of finding it here on Eka's.

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Posted by chibidiely777 1 year ago Report

I can still find those hidden away stuff in their gallery's of thr artist but thats hard when you dont know who is the artist and yes i wil watch you and bookmark you

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Posted by Mynameisnotbobby 2 weeks ago Report

NotBobby.ex has stopped working after reading this art

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Posted by Slimshod 13 days ago Report

Guess you need to reboot and read it again~

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