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Tags: ?/F Absorption Angry prey Arm Vore audience battle Bayonetta bigger pred Bird Pred Carmilla Cousin/Cousin Crossover Demon pred F/F familiar familiar pred Fatal Fate/Grand Order Female Pred Female Prey fight scene fighting back hellsing hellsing ultimate Implied Digestion Integra Fairbrook Wingates Hellsing Integra Hellsing Juliet Starling Lesbian lesbian couple lesbian pred lollipop chainsaw Pip Bernadotte Police girl Power theft public vore sentient boobs sentient fat Seras Seras Victoria smaller prey soul absorption Soul Vore Spectator talking boobs talking breasts Unwilling Prey Vampire vampire girl vampire pred vampire prey Vampire vore Vampires Waifu Waifu Pred
did I just cross Hellsing and fate? You're damn right I did!
I had a lot of fun with this (especially the fight scene and the dialogue between integra and bayo)
Any suggestions for Seras to meet while out on a enthusiastic walk?
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Posted by Tahg 4 years ago Report
A few noticeable mistakes. (eg angle instead of angel) Not sure what the bad character is, maybe musical notes? Doesn't work either in the browser or in Word for me, so maybe font specific.
Not sure the relationship of the two vampires either. The title calls Carmilla Seras' niece, but in the story you call them cousins.
Posted by nervousvampire 4 years ago Report
I realized the relation mistake today but i like the name so I may just ignore it.
Yes those are supposed to be music notes (I assume you are referring to the hey Micky part.) I was not aware they may not show up.
And as for the angel typo (slams head on my desk) I did it again, so I thank you for pointing that out.
Posted by nervousvampire 4 years ago Report
I see what you mean about the music not part, I will try to fix that
Posted by Night5Gaming 4 years ago Report
More cleavage vore please, sidenote kinda sad there wasn't weight gain described. I dont know much about bayo or fate tho.
Posted by Night5Gaming 4 years ago Report
Awesome story and references tho lol
Posted by nervousvampire 4 years ago Report
will probably do more cleavage vore at a later date. As for weight gain, I don't tend to describe it, I might at a later story but for the moment I don't.
i am glad to hear you enjoyed it though.