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Tags: ?/F Caring pred Caring Predator Casual digestion Casual pred Casual vore Consensual Crying crying prey depressed prey Fatal Female Prey Gentle Predator happy prey Heartbroken hopeless prey Implied Digestion kind predator kindness loving Loving pred loving prey Oral Vore pitiable prey sad pred Second Person Perspective Second Person POV second person pred self-loathing prey Soft Vore Unnamed characters unnamed pred unnamed prey Willing prey
I wanted to try something different so I would love some feed back on how it came out.
Let me know if this made you sad, I see it as a job well done
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Posted by Persona59523 5 years ago Report
Same that she is digested. It would been nice to see her living with the guy in his stomach, the acid instead of burning her, would just make her warm. Perhaps even give her pleasure.
Posted by Persona59523 5 years ago Report
Sad, I meant sad
Posted by nervousvampire 5 years ago Report
funny someone else pm'd me to ask if I would do a non fatal version or sequel.
Posted by TheMysteriousSadSack 5 years ago Report
This reminds me of a manga about a fuck up sucubus that gets laid off and becomes homeless but gets taken in by some guy. Its pretty cute and there arnt many chapters out. At any rate, you do get that feeling of hoplessness out of our prey here. I would say though rhat closer to the beginning she sounds more suicidal than depressed. Either way, spot on.
Posted by nervousvampire 5 years ago Report
okay please send me a link or name to this manga you speak as it sounds interesting
Posted by TheMysteriousSadSack 5 years ago Report
https://mangadex.org/title/42409/i-brought-home-a-succubus-who-failed-to-find-a-job
Posted by nervousvampire 5 years ago Report
thank you
Posted by nervousvampire 5 years ago Report
I thank you for that manga, it was a nice read. I will have to keep an eye on it for new chapters
Posted by TheMysteriousSadSack 5 years ago Report
Glad you enjoyed it, always happy to dish out some recommendations
Posted by Tahg 5 years ago Report
I find stories written in second person harder to read, (I guess the POV tag implies Reader's?) so if that's the something different you had in mind it's not my favorite. Other than that, I think it's as good as anything else you've written. I always prefer non-fatal but I try not to let that bias my thoughts on whether a story is good or not.
Posted by nervousvampire 5 years ago Report
ya the point of view was what I was referring to and I can fully see why someone might not like it.