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Posted by lazylayjay 5 years ago Report
This is set up to be a great competition but the real surprise is that there will be no Mitsuko in the final.
I wonder who will get to eat Caramel.
Posted by French_snack 5 years ago Report
I'm wondering that too. We'll see. She'll definitely be going down *someone's* throat! :)
Posted by lazylayjay 5 years ago Report
I just realized that I didn't say thank you for including my suggestion. Sorry about that! You have brought her to life, she's hot but I hope she gets hotter!
Posted by Bellyache 5 years ago Report
I think Grace is my favorite character so far. She seems quite sad and lonely like she needs a friend or two.
I hope the next part comes soon because this is best thing I've read since forever.
Posted by French_snack 5 years ago Report
Perhaps she'll make friends at the competition? We'll see!
Thank you! :)
Posted by Pabulum 5 years ago Report
Oh no! There's no part 4 yet. I was really enjoying that :(
Are you writing it at the moment?
Posted by French_snack 5 years ago Report
I haven't had time yet, but I might start on it tomorrow.
Posted by Sleepless 5 years ago Report
No Mitsuko in the final! That's a pity, she's one of my favorite characters. But it's okay because there are plenty of others I like too. And I bet we haven't even met some yet.
How many girls from Africa get into the final?
I'm dejected that there is no more to read yet, but I guess it gives me something to look forward too.
Hope you have a fun Easter!
Posted by French_snack 5 years ago Report
Only one girl from Africa can reach the final. So it's going to be fierce competition! There are nine contenders, so there'll be three rounds of vore-chess matches, with the final round being between the two winners of the second round games.
Have a good Easter!
Posted by DontTellMyWife 5 years ago Report
Already a classic. Liked here and DA.
I'm hyped for the next part!
Posted by French_snack 5 years ago Report
Thanks! :)
Posted by Fetishist 5 years ago Report
First rate vore drama. Honestly cannot wait for the next parts!
Posted by French_snack 5 years ago Report
Thank you! I'm glad you're enjoying it. :)
Posted by HappyBlanket 5 years ago Report
I've been a secret fan of these stories since I discovered my vore fetish a few years ago. I've been too shy to comment until now. I just want to say that they're my all time favourites. I'm really excited about the next part. Thankyou for writing so people like me have something to feed our imagination.
Posted by French_snack 5 years ago Report
You're very welcome, and thank you for commenting. I do appreciate it. :)
Posted by petitepred 5 years ago Report
Nice writing, very creative with Caramel. She sounds adorable!
Posted by French_snack 5 years ago Report
Thanks. She is, rather. And also (she hopes) delicious!
Posted by passingthroughyou 5 years ago Report
The Snack is back! Wow what a great story to get us in the groove for the big finale. I wonder which of these sexy girls will make it to Seoul. My money is on Vivee but Nelly seems very determined.
Posted by French_snack 5 years ago Report
It certainly promises to be a tough competition! Vivee is quite ready, and has a good appetite... but so, indeed, does Nelly. And Nelly is a trained athlete!
Posted by Ladybellylover 5 years ago Report
I like what you have done with Caramel, very inventive. The preds have another competition to keep them occupied.
I thought 3 parts was a bit short but this explains why. Nice build up. Now for the main event!
Posted by Diabolique 5 years ago Report
Comme d'habitude, je suis attiré par la chaleur de ces personnages. Tu écris vore avec beaucoup de goût. J'attends avec impatience les prochains versements.
Posted by French_snack 5 years ago Report
Merci ! C'est une remarque qui me fait beaucoup plaisir.