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The ever smug and adorable Kaguya gets caught in a bit of a compromising situation and finds that the best way out of it is using her stomach.
Finally got off my ass and uploaded something after a handful of years. Hopefully this'll incentivize me to post somewhat regularly, but no promises.
I've got a general plan for how this whole series'll shake out, and if the length of this first part was any indication, it'll practically be a small novel by the end.
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Posted by Siorche 4 years ago Report
Yooo, you did very well with the portrayal of the characters in this! Of course, it's hard t maintain integrity of the characters when you make them eat eachother, but I'd say you did a really good job. Overall it was a nice thing to read, too.
Big fan of Kaguya Sama. I intend on actually getting some art of an idea I had laying around aha.
Posted by StygianSkies 4 years ago Report
Thanks, haha. A lot of the rising action of this part was inspired by an attempt at mimicking a typical chapter from the manga, so I'm glad that came through. I still feel like some of my dialogue is a bit stiff, so I'll try and work on that moving forward.
Love your frequent commissions by the way.
Posted by Siorche 4 years ago Report
Thanks! That really means a lot, and yeah, I could practically hear the narrator speak, and to be fair to yourself Hayasaka tends to speak stiffly to Kaguya so I'd say it's fine in that regard.