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***DISPOSAL WARNING***
Kaguya handles the fallout of her last meal and stumbles her way into a second one. This time might not be as much of an accident, though.
For this chapter, I included a rather lengthy disposal scene, so I apologize if the first part intrigued you and that's not your thing. The section in question is near the beginning and marked off pretty clearly, so I hope you can still enjoy the rest.
I also knew I was going to have a fairly long narrative chunk in this chapter to set up future plot points, so I tried to bookend it with long erotic scenes to compensate. What did you all think?
EDIT: Tried converting both works to .rtf format to fix the weird spacing errors. If you remember the previous version, I'd appreciate if you notified me whether this is an overall improvement on the eyes or not.
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Posted by No-One 5 years ago Report
Pretty nice. I'm looking forward to seeing who else ends up as fat on Kaguya's thighs.
Or maybe it will be easier to list who doesn't.
Posted by StygianSkies 5 years ago Report
Spoilers: You're probably right
Posted by Marshall59 5 years ago Report
Good job! Someone had to be the first to write about this series, and im glad it turned out to be a series. Looking forward to the next chapter!
Posted by StygianSkies 5 years ago Report
Thanks for the kind regards! Kaguya is one of two girls that I'm weak to, so after a few years of absolutely zero content, I guess I just got fed up enough to make some myself. It's turned to be more fun than I expected, so I'm hoping to branch out eventually.
Posted by dekabreak 5 years ago Report
I see Kaguya's path to become a serial predator is going well, i can see this Kaguya a few years from now paying Hayasaka or someone to bring her some people to eat with Hayasaka still being weirded out at how much she loves eating people.
Wonder how long it will be till Fujiwara is next.
Posted by StygianSkies 5 years ago Report
The slow corruption angle has always appealed to me in fiction, in vore erotica and elsewhere as well. I'm hoping to have her thought process gradually shift to the point where it's believable in-universe for her to go after close friends before having her do it.
She'll definitely get there though, don't you worry.
Posted by dekabreak 5 years ago Report
Well, she seems quite corrupted already, but she could always be more corrupted!
But yeah, a kind of story i love in vore is someone who never tried or didn't even know vore existed eating someone for the first time and loving it more and more, the nicer the character was before eating someone, the better the corruption.
I also love that Hayasaka was the one that started the corruption just to help Kaguya and because it's her job, something about others being responsible for corruption is also nice, even if it wasn't on purpose.
Posted by Jedic123 5 years ago Report
One of the best disposal scenes I've seen, looking forward to seeing more in whatever chapters ya put 'em in.
Posted by StygianSkies 5 years ago Report
They're probably not gonna be that long again for the remainder of this series for the same reason no swallowing scenes will be. I tried to really give special treatment to all of Kaguya's "firsts" and go through each minor step in as realistic detail I could manage, following her thoughts and reactions to the stimuli.
There'll definitely be some more as supplement to scenes intended to display her growing hedonism, though. I had some of the most fun writing that scene out of everything thus far, probably only losing to her acting more and more like a pig to Shirogane in part 3, and would love to take another crack at it whenever I get to other characters and franchises.
Posted by Jedic123 5 years ago Report
Well, in addition to that, due to the nature of Vore it'd be much of the same each time with the only real difference between them being the character's reaction to the act itself. If you went into the same detail every time, it'd get fairly repetitive quickly and lose the reaction you're probably going for. Though, it could be interesting to do another once she gets to a character that she cares about and then show the juxtaposition between her old personality towards them and this new personality during the disposal of them.
Of course, you do you fam. It reminds me of Observer's stuff before he nuked his gallery which is a bit of a niche that I haven't found executed as well as I've seen here.
Posted by Circle0Trick 5 years ago Report
"For this chapter, I included a rather lengthy disposal scene..."
me: T A R G E T L O C K E D
Posted by StygianSkies 5 years ago Report
Yeah, I'm gradually beginning to realize that's a common reaction from the rates the view counts on the three pieces have been increasing. Adding a hearty disposal scene and some weight gain drew in droves of new readers, and temporarily laying off the former to get some plot progression done slowed it down a bit. I think you'll be pleased with the remaining chapters.