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Marcus Nimis begrudgingly elaborates the first victim devoured by his carnivorous roommate - Amy from Suisei no gargantia in all her cheerful, peppy glory. If only she didn't have such cute legs....
Commission for TheCreeper
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Posted by theheadsn 4 years ago Report
loved it! Liked the dynamic between Marcus and Audrey II. Hopefully we'll get to read more
Posted by Narrows 4 years ago Report
Thanks, glad you enjoyed it! Luckily the commissioner has set up three more ladies for the chopping block, so stay tuned!
Posted by TCC 4 years ago Report
This is a damn fine read bro.
The prose is expertly crafted and an absolute joy to read. The fact that the actual vore (and foot) content absolute diamonds is just a bonus.
Looking forward to the next chapter.
Posted by Narrows 4 years ago Report
Thank you, glad you enjoyed it! Glad to see a fellow foot fan out and about! Stay tuned, there's more on the way!
Posted by PrinnyDood 4 years ago Report
I finally managed to set aside some to to give your writing a proper look, and I'm mighty impressed!
I've long thought the classic creature from Little Shop of Horrors was a fairly perfect predator, and your descriptive language especially is stupendous.
Not surprised at all you're getting commissioned, now that I've rad this.
Posted by Narrows 4 years ago Report
Very much appreciated! Audrey-II does strike that perfect blend of fun and voraciousness in my opinion. Thanks for giving my work a read, I appreciate the feedback!