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i have no idea how to get this working but i think you can download the story? let me know if it works or if you want part 2
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Posted by Wolfsage 4 years ago Report
Where do you download it?
Posted by rubberducky942 4 years ago Report
under the empty white box it says +add to favorites/ full size/ download <---I think you can read it there but not sure, if anybody knows how to get the text to show without download option I would greatly appreciate =)
Posted by no one 4 years ago Report
While it needs some work editing wise, the story was pretty good overall.
Posted by rubberducky942 4 years ago Report
what part needs editing I can do that easy enough, I know lots of gramma and spelling mistakes and few scenes were just like huh, whats the story line anymore. thanks for the input =)
Posted by chinesechicken16 4 years ago Report
Definitely a good story, try uploading it as a .txt, or .pdf file, maybe that will work.
Posted by rubberducky942 4 years ago Report
pdf and rtf files caused a fatal error so I had to use docx I can try txt soon as I learn how =) thanks for the info
Posted by WillingWombPrey 4 years ago Report
I'd definitely like a sequal.
Posted by TW 4 years ago Report
Not bad, lots of spelling/grammar issues. I would highly suggest running this through a free site like Grammarly to pick out the blatent ones. Also, paragraphs are your friend and help you avoid run on sentences.
Not a bad job for your attempt, I would like to see more.
Posted by DnD6 3 years ago Report
Its not downloading. The file is unavailable
Posted by Stardust1dragon 1 year ago Report
Same