I really love the scenario here, and the ending with a collection of jars as trophies was great, but I felt the vore itself could do with more detail. I know, easier said than done, just trying to give you some constructive criticism. Oh, also loved the dialogue, that was a nice touch. Hope there's more somewhere down the road.
Posted by SuperheroFood 4 years ago Report
I really love the scenario here, and the ending with a collection of jars as trophies was great, but I felt the vore itself could do with more detail. I know, easier said than done, just trying to give you some constructive criticism. Oh, also loved the dialogue, that was a nice touch. Hope there's more somewhere down the road.