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Noblesse Oblige 6: Indulging a Fantasy By StygianSkies -- Report

Kaguya immediately abuses her newfound freedom, the school idols are used to reel in a massive catch, and Hayasaka uses the Shinomiya fortune in a way that would shame her forefathers.

Wow, this one ended up getting really degenerate. I guess the goal was always to end up at that point though, so mission accomplished?

Yet again, I had to split this one once I realized that I was sixteen pages in and hadn't even started the last third of my outline. I'm realizing as the days go by that my original footnotes for chapter 5 were honestly enough to cover a small novel on their own. I don't know what the fuck I was thinking trying to cram it all into one part.

Anyways, we've moved up to eight chapters now. I think as a result of the reworked pacing, I'm gonna give more focus to a minor event I planned for the middle-end of this chapter to make sure each of the remaining two are about as long as their predecessors.

Since I wanted to make sure each chapter hit a corruption milestone and I had to stop before the one I originally intended here, I dropped in some foreshadowing for endgame events. Hopefully you can see how far I intend on going by now.

I had to write this part on a shitty backup PC, so tell me if you notice any weird formatting oddities since I'm too tired to proofread this right now.

As always, thanks for reading and sharing your thoughts!

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No-One

Posted by No-One 4 years ago Report

She's going to have a hard time eating many more if she's already losing mobility. Or at least she'll be dependent on someone else to catch them for her.

StygianSkies

Posted by StygianSkies 4 years ago Report

Never underestimate the wallet of a Shinomiya! She'll still be mobile enough to attend school for the time being now that her gut is empty though. Well, for a little while at least.

Mechdragon1k

Posted by Mechdragon1k 4 years ago Report

I am half expecting her predatory nature be explained by dragon blood heritage, probably because I love dragons so just wishful thinking. Still would make a lot of sense to explain how powerful and predatory that family is.

StygianSkies

Posted by StygianSkies 4 years ago Report

I'd like to think anyone in-universe is capable of getting this far in concept, but Kaguya is just greedier and more opportunistic than anyone prior

Trex4

Posted by Trex4 4 years ago Report

She just broken her friendship with Hayasaka and now Hayasaka feel really sad that her mistress is not caring about what she’s doing that is hurt Hayasaka feelings. Which makes me wonder should Hayasaka also vore to save there friendship and help her mistress complete her mission or keep doing what she needs to do and have her feelings hurt until there’s nothing left

Trex4

Posted by Trex4 4 years ago Report

Same goes to Kaguya keep using the power of vore to make the president fall in love with her or stop now while she can get back her friend while she is treating her as a servant and a snack and go on a different direction on making the president confess his feelings towards Kaguya

StygianSkies

Posted by StygianSkies 4 years ago Report

I'm gonna level with you: I'm not a huge fan of happy endings

Trex4

Posted by Trex4 4 years ago Report

Oh ok but that isn’t ok to treat Kaguya and Hayasaka friendship like that but I will create my own

No-One

Posted by No-One 4 years ago Report

You've dropped off the face of the world again. Everything still ok?