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Great Feast for a Great Jagras [CM] By RexLou -- Report

Thinking she can see something unique, The Handler runs off from her huntress guide towards a sound deep in the Ancient Forest. She finds something unique alright...

This story is a commission for  JackHereTheRealOne based on his picture of a gloriously glutted Jagras. It's a pleasure and an honor to work for an artist like him and I hope to please again in the future. Moderately long fic here, somewhere over 6K words, so keep that in mind and please enjoy.

I had help from  BlaringMaja,  Crash and others. There are some really great people who can help you a lot out there, I really encourage y'all to ask for help if you need it.

Google docs link: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1YADG87vtyKNWYTYYnhtdiiujD2Yjuh13lytfTIuj6tM/edit?usp=sharing

DA link: https://www.deviantart.com/rex-the-lou/art/Jagras-Femme-Flavored-Feast-I-Vore-CM-839001185

full picture: https://aryion.com/g4/view/614633

All characters and settings are owned by Capcom. Don't sue, I don't wanna end up like Sagat's chest.

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TimeToRun

Posted by TimeToRun 4 years ago Report

This is just amazing, I love the focus on the digestion :) I played the game to death over the last few months, must say the game is amazing. But I do get annoyed by the Handler sometimes. She always managed to get into trouble due shear impulsive behaviour. Sometimes I wish she gets eaten by the monsters she approaches way to close. The only thing missing is a option to turn all the monsters into cute and hungry monstersgirls ^^. And I will gladly watch the handler run off to those monsters and choosing the option not to save her :) Sorry for the long comment, I just like the story a lot :D

RexLou

Posted by RexLou 4 years ago Report

I'm really glad you had this much fun! I love the series a lot but never got too deep into World. Felt like it took too much for me to get going in that game... and I also suck with PC controls XD

I can certainly agree on wanting to feed the monsters The Handler and I think my commissioner could as well :3

deletobn219gh6

Posted by deletobn219gh6 4 years ago Report

Niiiice stuff! The onomatoepia (hope I'm spelling that right) is just exquisite~

RexLou

Posted by RexLou 4 years ago Report

That's really appreciated man! I'm glad that the stomach noises I pick haven't gone stale yet >///<

nervousvampire

Posted by nervousvampire 4 years ago Report

Fantastic, I love the way the hander is taking notes the entire time, there s a guanine element of research and study with the way you write the hander's thoughts. I also loved the jagras pov, with her almost joyful cruelness to the hander yet always coming across like her nature and a dragon with her collection.

RexLou

Posted by RexLou 4 years ago Report

I'm really happy you enjoyed every element of this story! I had a lot of fun putting it together and writing the various perspectives in it. I'm glad that you caught different details from each character's point-of-view.

nervousvampire

Posted by nervousvampire 4 years ago Report

Oh you did a great job with the different views, the jagras comes across as cruel yet playful and yet never feels like it's being evil, it's just its nature to gobble up anything that gets to close. It's the handlers fault for not being more carful.
Then there is the handler herself who almost seems like she fell in love with the jagras to the point I was half expecting her to just accept that she was food and be happy to study the digestion even if it's only her who would know.

Hivelord

Posted by Hivelord 3 years ago Report

So did she eat the guard or not? Its kind of ambiguous.

RexLou

Posted by RexLou 3 years ago Report

She ate the guard. I likely could have explained that part better lol