Posted by boyot 4 years ago Report

Is this a spin on the lake placid movies? If so well done, if not still epic.

Posted by PrinnyDood 4 years ago Report

This was most certainly inspired by Lake Placid! (Though I only ever saw the 1st one, but still . . .)

Posted by Nalzindar 4 years ago Report

Your stories never disappoint, I wish they made "horror movies" more like this ; )
It turns out that stealing mushrooms is a far more hazardous game than what it appears to be. Nice and sexy predator this one turned out to be. My favorite moment (beside from seeing the various ways the unfortunate girls were caught and eaten) was when the last two girls more or less ran into her squirming stomach. What a surprise XD

Posted by PrinnyDood 4 years ago Report

Thanks! I could definitely go for a subgenre of horror in this theme! x3

I'm glad you liked her 'stealth tummy' maneuver! Despite their fearsome capabilities, crocodiles and alligators are very focused on stealth and ambush tactics when hunting . . . so it seems appropriate the monster-girl version would be too.

Posted by bigboy1992 4 years ago Report

Could we possible have a sequel where a large group goes out to hunt her down only to become dinner?

Posted by PrinnyDood 4 years ago Report

Well . . . I don't have any concrete sequel plans at the moment, but she was a very fun predator, so who knows? I might revisit her some time! :D

Posted by nomnomfap 4 years ago Report

Excellent story! I like how you always find something fresh for your internal scenes.

Posted by PrinnyDood 4 years ago Report

Thanks!

Sometimes I worry my vore sequences/internals are a bit repetitive, so I'm very glad to hear I'm keeping them relatively fresh still!

Posted by nomnomfap 4 years ago Report

This one really got me: "The unbelievable rush of conflicting sensations left Dixi panting and flushed, overwhelmed and barely able to think."

I love when prey gets turned on in a stomach. And it's encouraging to me to hear even someone of your calibre worries about your writing!

Posted by Courier3227 4 years ago Report

These are great. Love the begging but I think you could humiliate them more inside the stomach and out. Like when the redhead came back out and started crying and begging but more gratuitous. Otherwise maybe have some more of their thoughts while their digesting for a bit

Posted by PrinnyDood 4 years ago Report

Thanks! I had a lot of fun with this one.

It's always a tough balance in terms of how much focus to dedicate to the plight of the prey, and their experience in the stomach . . . all parts I very much enjoy, though I don't typically go very far into the actual digesting.

Posted by anais2000 4 years ago Report

Don't worry, it's a fantasy so we YUMs can fill in the gaps a little bit. I don't usually fantasize a lot after the victim is half-melted but still conscious anyway. :)

Posted by PrinnyDood 4 years ago Report

Yeah, I think it's overall good to leave a bit to the imagination, especially in terms of exactly how much digesting the hapless YUMs go through.

Posted by longwayofftiff 4 years ago Report

Another group of nubile girls en route to turddom...

Posted by PrinnyDood 4 years ago Report

Well, at least the predator had a good time, eh?

(Glad to see you're still kicking around, too!)

Posted by Umhuebr 4 years ago Report

What a fantastic tale! Your stories never disappoint! I couldn't help but notice Roco always seemed to ask a similar question to the girls, only eating them after they replied they did not want to be eaten (even though, as the story said, Roco didn't actually understand what they were saying and vice-versa). Still, can't help but be curious and wonder just exactly what Roco was trying to ask them...
Also, I'd like to point out that, for some reason, I was really surprised with Lana's early demise. Didn't expect her to be gobbled up that early in the story.
Great work!

Posted by PrinnyDood 4 years ago Report

Thanks! Glad you enjoyed this part of my 'quest' to write vore about every conceivable variety of monster-girl. x3

While a wrote this a while ago, as I recall, Roco was asking some variation of 'can you understand what I'm saying?'. Despite her somewhat single-minded predator nature, she is still a little curious about this 'adoptive' world she's made her home. Unfortunately for those she catches, without some sort of translation magic/technology, there's basically 0% chance they'll speak her tongue, since she's from a whole other world.

Posted by Umhuebr 4 years ago Report

Oh, that makes sense! It's, in a way, cute that Roco has that curiosity. I must say, I didn't expect you'd actually explain what it was that she was asking. Thank you, Dood!